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Overall I'm undecided. Emi's was my first, and I was totally caught off guard by the severity of her trauma. I wanted to see Hisao finally get through to her, and I was compelled to keep playing through the wee hours of the morning until I was certain that she'd finally let him in . Great stuff. I w...

These are glorious.

Okay, so for the sake of argument I'll just say we should assume that they live in the city but often head over to the Yamaku area to relax. Or something.

Switching the timeframe was a very good call. It flipped my reaction from, "Ehh... okaaaay..." to, "Jesus Christ now I need a new pancreas." My only major criticism is that it's traditional to put characters' inner-monologue thoughts in italics. Thanks! :) I'd considered doing s...

Wow, you posted that just as I submitted the revision. Nice! :lol: Score! So you changed the time frame to a couple of years? I think that much better than a several months cause I felt before that Hanako's overcoming of her stuttering was a little too soon so a couple of years definitely makes mor...

lblf wrote:I'm game for any well written (happy) pieces of Hanako, I'll be waiting

Wow, you posted that just as I submitted the revision. Nice!

Thanks! I've combed it over something fierce and I have to say I'm much more proud of it than I was of the initial draft. Which I didn't consider a draft at first... :P Anyway, it's just about ready for posting. I just want to get a second set of eyes on it for proofreading and then it'll replace th...

Thanks everybody. :) After giving it some thought, I've decided I'm not done with it. The more I considered it, the more I realized that there really wasn't much of a reason to keep it set so close to the game's timeline, so first and foremost I'm going to be pushing it ahead a bit. I'm also determi...

Boy, am I glad Suriko didn't finish Hanako's path on such a sappy note^^° A proposal just a few weeks after getting together is laying it on a bit thickly... It's supposed to be several months (not entirely sure of the timeframe), actually... But yeah. I dunno, for some reason I felt like Hanako an...

Nice to finally see a Hanako fic post-release that's not written by me. Anyway, the third person really got to me, and not in a particularly good way. Since we only see what she sees, and all the thoughts are hers, such as when she's thinking that he's going to abandon her, I would have written it ...

I'm not gonna lie, this one had me totally riveted. I started reading it during lunch and finished it on the train ride home. It's incredibly good, but my god man... I'm not sure if I've ever wanted to "BAAAAAAWWWWW!!!" so hard in my life!

Hey all! Moderate-time lurker, first time poster. After playing through way more KS than is probably healthy, I decided to take a shot at writing my own bit of fiction. I'd say it sounds weird to feel compelled to write an epilogue to a particular character's story because I really wanted to know ho...