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I registered to post this, heh. So, you're having her go from being simply scatterbrained, to full-on blackouts or catatonic episodes or something? Seems a little, I dunno, out of nowhere. Anyway, not a bad story. I have a soft spot for Rinfic. While I can't comment too much with out spoiling where...

Hello, here is chapter 8, and again thanks to CommnderShepard for catching things I didn't. Change Pt1. He's carrying me, I don't know how I feel about that. He said he loved me. I know how I feel about that. All I can see is Hisao's face, while he's taking care of me. Part of me wants to know why, ...

To be honest, I sorta liked Shizune's route, although I didn't understand her. A bit like this would've helped a lot of people "get her".

Good story.

K, thanks for clearing that up. I also like visual novels. I think Mountaineer is apart of another visual novel called "Salty Tears". So far the April Fools demo is out. I dunno if I'm allowed to mention it here, so PM me for the link. Heh, I've read his work on the forums here, and I cau...

Ey Homeless, Long time no see. Love the story :^). I was wondering if you had some sort of schedule about when you post... ... ...You might have posted it somewhere but I guess I missed it :lol: Actually I don't have a schedule, but I try to aim at having a new chapter out every few days, a week at...

Couldn't read it. Tried a few times, but just couldn't do it. Why not? It seems okay to me. Honestly? TF2 isn't a crossover game. It's a shoot'em up game. You blow shit up, shit happens.. ect.. ect. Doesn't work well with KS. His story line was weak, and well just copied anything he could basically...

Couldn't read it. Tried a few times, but just couldn't do it.

Yeah, you got it. People seem to think the abstract is something you can bounce back and forth from. I don't think it's like that. Once you have the skill for it, maybe, but thats the thing. The one skill we are all taught is pretty much linear. (IE real things, get a job, get married, have kids) Ab...

Daitengu wrote:Your Rin sentence got chopped.

Fixed. Thanks.

Part eight: Criticisms welcome, enjoy! Confessions of a butterfly catcher. Rin and I are laying in the back yard, watching the clouds float by. It's just after lunch and my parents have already left for work. We head back to school in the next two days. I almost don't want to go, knowing that I'll b...

WTF? I'm thinking to myself, he's ruined a perfectly good story.

You, sir, are a genius and a bastard.

Part seven. Enjoy. The Muse. We make it back to Hisaos house late. I head up the stairs after Hisao lets us in. In the guest room, I flip the light on and go into my luggage looking for my drawing things. Hisao is at the door to my room. “Rin?”, he says looking rather tired. “I'm not tired, you are ...

Any chance we could get this updated? I'd like to try it Really not that hard to modify yourself, when you have a character in mind. Just figure out what aspects you want to use, to define how your character behaves, then write a template to plug all that information into. I actually was looking at...

http://mentarushoujo.forumotions.com/t196-original-character-personality-guide-or-how-to-take-the-fun-out-of-everything Here's a writing exercise I came up with in a fit of insomnia, for anyone intending to hold onto a character for a long term project. It's away to learn and develop things about a...

I am in awe of your writing talents.