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by Dawnstorm
Fri Aug 17, 2012 6:40 pm
Forum: Feedback
Topic: the Final Verdict ( HEAVY SPOILERS )
Replies: 2
Views: 4179

Re: the Final Verdict ( HEAVY SPOILERS )

Heh, it's interesting how differently people can react to the game. To me, it shows how there's something for everyone in it. My impression is almost the opposite of yours. Here's my ranking of the arks: 1. Rin (To me, she's definitely the same person in Act 1 and beyond. The neutral ending, to me, ...
by Dawnstorm
Thu Aug 16, 2012 5:49 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The "feels" bazaar.
Replies: 2254
Views: 589066

Re: Just finished the game and this is my first post. Oh man

I think my favourite part about was they were looking each other in the eyes the whole time......that's powerful. People tend to miss that when they call Shizune too forceful (and the sex awkward) in this scene. Btw, while none of the paths have that many choices, Shizune has the least. All the oth...
by Dawnstorm
Sun Aug 12, 2012 5:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
Replies: 202
Views: 97056

Re: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]

That's not a problem. The whole good/neutral/bad thing is rather silly anyway, since it's only taking into account whether Hisao gets the girl and not whether this is actually a good or bad thing for anyone involved. I'm not even sure what "get the girl" would entail with Miya. I know how...
by Dawnstorm
Fri Aug 10, 2012 5:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
Replies: 202
Views: 97056

Re: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]

Not sure what to make of this Hanako. She has a strangely 'formal' train of thought, and seems to be much more negative and judgmental then she usually lets on. People who are left to themselves and read a lot tend to have formal trains of thought, since they're influenced by reading. (I'm thinking...
by Dawnstorm
Fri Aug 10, 2012 2:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
Replies: 202
Views: 97056

Re: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]

For story-post navigation please refer to the index post . II.3. Disorientation “Hanako?” She looks down, to avoid his eyes. Hisao has been odd, lately, and it is Kitagawa's fault. On the day of the cultural festival, Hanako has seen them together, and the next day, he is absent in class. It has bee...
by Dawnstorm
Fri Aug 10, 2012 2:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
Replies: 202
Views: 97056

Re: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]

But my only complaint is that maybe Emi was a bit down. Normally she would try to cheer him up a bit more, I think. But that's just me, and I liked that version too. Makes her a bit more adult-like, I think, as she's being more careful with "Changed Hisao". It's not really just you. Somet...
by Dawnstorm
Fri Aug 03, 2012 7:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
Replies: 202
Views: 97056

Re: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]

That may be part of it. Emi's point of view is probably a lot more different than the front she presents. That said, I've deliberately written her more "careful", because she's sensing something off about Hisao. (In the game, they have great chemistry [the best, IMO], so that's never real...
by Dawnstorm
Fri Aug 03, 2012 11:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
Replies: 202
Views: 97056

Re: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]

I'm a bit fuzzy on why Hisao was so confused, though; he didn't seem that bad at the end of the last chapter. I mean, yes, Miya's bewildering in the best of times, but here he's acting like his brain has shorted out. It's a little odd. Next scene should address his state of mind. (I may have gone o...
by Dawnstorm
Thu Aug 02, 2012 6:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
Replies: 202
Views: 97056

Re: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]

For story-post navigation please refer to the index post . II. 2. Worrying It is Tuesday morning, the second day after the Cultural Festival. The figure approaching the race track turns out to be Hisao. He is wearing shorts and a T-shirt. And what might just pass for running shoes. Emi is so surpris...
by Dawnstorm
Tue Jul 31, 2012 1:57 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4989
Views: 4867654

Re: Ask!

If I'm not mistaken, this is a Marimite reference. No big deal. There was a time when I didn't know what that abbreviation was about. Also I kept reading that as Marmite (which is not the desired reference). So for those who are as clueless now as I was then: Marimite = Maria Sama ga Miteru . (And,...
by Dawnstorm
Mon Jul 30, 2012 12:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
Replies: 202
Views: 97056

Re: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]

Heh. The moment people say "Thank god it's short," I know I'm doing it wrong. I hope this is going somewhere . . . It is. I knew how it was going to end before the first post on here. I can't guarantee folk will like where it goes, though. It's not a "route". I couldn't have writ...
by Dawnstorm
Sun Jul 29, 2012 8:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
Replies: 202
Views: 97056

Re: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]

For story-post navigation please refer to the index post . Part 2 Confrontations with the Incubus #2 Now, this is really too soon. Not even a week? Ah, but much has happened, my love. Much has happened. Not even a week... No threats today, my love? Go and take my breath. What do I care? I don't want...
by Dawnstorm
Sat Jul 21, 2012 4:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
Replies: 202
Views: 97056

Re: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]

And of course the reference to Schopenhauer's porcupines has me thinking of Asuka Soryu; Mia seems like the Asuka we'd get a couple of years after 3I, vicious and in pain and hurtful even though she isn't actively malicious. Good thing Hisao's not quite as nebbish as Shinji! :lol: It's not the firs...
by Dawnstorm
Wed Jul 18, 2012 2:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
Replies: 202
Views: 97056

Re: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]

This would be what I'm mostly referring to. Thanks; I'll check it out eventually. Wonder if you would make a Good Ending & Bad Ending as well? Would be nice to see a Bad Ending. Hm, I know how it'll end (there's only one ending), but I have trouble telling if it's a good/bad or neutral end. Tha...
by Dawnstorm
Mon Jul 16, 2012 6:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
Replies: 202
Views: 97056

Re: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]

Miyako Kitagawa is Hanako's dark side. That's quite insightful on Lilly's part. Does she realize just how close she really is to falling into that other category with Hanako? I wonder if she can face it. I think she might have had a hunch all along (even in the game she comes across as slightly apo...