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- Wed Nov 06, 2013 6:44 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 854
- Views: 479461
Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 11/06/13 ~ C.42 - Unexpected Layov
All that said, I really hope Hisao has a good excuse for not calling for several days... Yeah I've also wondered if this isn't getting into the idiot ball trope by now with both Aiko and Hisao continuously failing to make a proper call or getting the message across overall. For now I think it's sti...
- Wed Nov 06, 2013 1:56 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: OC "Neko" - Route [reconsidered]
- Replies: 123
- Views: 35849
Re: OC "Neko" - Route [cancelled]
This was my first -- and last -- attempt at fan fiction. I'll leave this to the experts from now on, since that is apparently all that is welcome to a voice here. Thanks for putting up with me as long as you did. Seems to be just about the opposite of the impressions that I get from this forum. I'm...
- Wed Nov 06, 2013 11:26 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 854
- Views: 479461
Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 11/06/13 ~ C.42 - Unexpected Layov
Finally a new chapter, was longing for it for weeks. I'm a bit surprised about Yoko's characterization this chapter. While I understand that she's grown more confident and all thanks to Aiko and co. during the last couple of weeks I didn't expect her to be quite so happy and confident around her fat...
- Mon Nov 04, 2013 8:25 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Ooe Way: A Natsume fic*CH.II 30/11*
- Replies: 12
- Views: 6960
Re: The Ooe Way: A Natsume fic
“I must say, of all the newspaper club rooms I’ve seen, this has got to be the biggest.” I say “How many have you seen?” Natsume speaks for the first time. “One.” “So this makes two?” “No, this makes one.” Naomi and Natsume look at each other, then me. I can feel myself blushing. I can tell that wa...
- Fri Nov 01, 2013 11:18 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 736221
Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 22 up 10/31]
Eh, I guess we can agree to disagree then.Mirage_GSM wrote: It's also very much unlike Lilly to say things she hasn't thought through beforehand. Yes, she is in an agitated state right then, but for her to say something like that to Hanako by [/i]accident[/i] is...
- Fri Nov 01, 2013 4:09 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 736221
Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 22 up 10/31]
I actually really can't quite tell how much Hisao and Hanako want to talk to Lilly about any of this or even at all; the same applies vice versa. I imagine after the last couple calls all of 'em wouldn't be too keen on calling again, I'd say especially Lilly, who had a bit of finality in her last c...
- Sat Oct 26, 2013 5:12 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 736221
Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 21 up 10/26]
True, if they do have another phone conversation I wouldn't be surprised if Lilly figured out something is going on. I actually really can't quite tell how much Hisao and Hanako want to talk to Lilly about any of this or even at all; the same applies vice versa. I imagine after the last couple calls...
- Sat Oct 26, 2013 4:49 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 736221
Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 21 up 10/26]
Goddamn it Emi, stop running when you've got issues with your legs. Also, for the love of god, do NOT go on a run during rainfall. Listen to that guy in your ear that tells you it's a bad idea! "Thanks. I thought I felt a little slow, but I figured you'd tell me if I screwed anything up." ...
- Sat Oct 26, 2013 12:07 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]
- Replies: 124
- Views: 57886
Re: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 10/26]
Nice chapter, really liked this: “A sexy sandwich? A tuna sandwich with some lingerie?” I give her a smirk. One small error I groan and have to actually stop myself from slamming my head on the table. It pain would be preferable to the headache... Its or better even that/the considering the context....
- Tue Oct 22, 2013 6:46 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
- Replies: 864
- Views: 419115
Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence){u 10/20/2
Regarding Emi, I don't think nurse would be the type to cover up something like this, but I can't see anybody getting expelled for causing an accident. She's in for a hell of a lot of detention though. I don't think he'd cover up for Emi but still try his best to prevent as severe punishment as exp...
- Tue Oct 22, 2013 3:13 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
- Replies: 864
- Views: 419115
Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence){u 10/20/2
Well it's really hard to anticipate what would happen in such a situation if a student were to cause a near fatal accident for another student. First of all I simply have no idea what the Japanese law would say in cases like this. Then there's also the higher expectancy of a student death in Yamaku....
- Mon Oct 21, 2013 10:39 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Zombies - Updated 17/12/13
- Replies: 80
- Views: 26480
Re: Zombies - Updated 20/10/13
I dislike the idea that zombies, who are in pretty much all cases stupider versions of normal humans, somehow end up being the better survivalists in our world. I mean excuse me Mr. Zombie but just because you don't care about pain and hunger that still doesn't mean that your missing right leg doesn...
- Mon Oct 21, 2013 9:40 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
- Replies: 864
- Views: 419115
Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence){u 10/20/2
I share the same sentiments as Mirage. This was the kind of hospital chapter I was hoping for but didn't expect to get. Feels like you thought of pretty much everything. I was anticipating how all this would affect Emi (and Nurse) especially much, and you dealt with it nicely so far. Of course, whil...
- Sat Oct 19, 2013 6:39 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 736221
Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 20 up 10/19]
Was supposed to be neutral. But instead of elaborating on what the fuck I was trying to write I'll instead say yes, Tomorrow's Doom is darn great and this fanfic is too. Am eagerly awaiting updates for both of em :> To get back a bit closer on topic: Time seems to stand still as we sit there, my hea...
- Sat Oct 19, 2013 5:39 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 736221
Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 20 up 10/19]
edit: See, now it took me so long to come up with the second part of my reply that you already fixed the link (and turns out I was right, or well at least sex with both). The link leads to a mostly blanc site reading "Invalid article ID". That said, I have checked out some of that comic a ...