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Something like "As the great hundred tun mountain of steel barreled towards me in an unstoppable rush of destruction, I knew escape was not possible. A strange calm fell over me as I gently laid down on the road, feeling the cool asphalt caressing my cheek as if saying a final goodbye. I looked...

The better one shots I've read tend to be in the range of 1000-2000 words, usually if they get any longer they start coming in parts. These don't seem to be one shots to me, but quotes or extremely short summaries that would be used as the basis of a larger plot.

I feel like I may have failed KS with this question - but who is Miyagi?

http://img2.imageshack.us/img2/1222/ss541.jpg This is most likely the worst necro of all time, but I can't stop laughing at this, WHY?!?!?!? So I'm not the only one who looked through a 3-4 year old post and wanted to necro it just to reply to that, good, this is good. I so want to get a job as a t...

Well, I love the concept as it's certainly original, but if you don't mind me saying, I think you should slow down(alot) and possibly take a walk the opposite direction. What scene is this, where is this, how do they know each other, how did they get there, why do they have that cliche "I like ...

Would make a bit more sense this way(imo) the virus already lives in them and is functional, but it can't overpower the human consciousness, however when they die and that "spark" that runs the body is no longer in control, the zombie virus can take over functions. Obviously it's not exact...

I'm not entirely sure what to make of this thread, the story was fairly decent in my opinion, although I would warn you not to take a goats opinion to heart. I can't help but notice that the comment section seems to be rather... frisky. Short and sad/feels fanfics aren't really my thing but I do lov...

I was beginning to think this was abandoned, nice to see an update Themo, so hard to find good Shizune fanfic.

Yeah, seems I should've done even more exposition than I did, to get the characters to the points I showed. I guess the idea is that I was trying to develop too many characters, but only focusing on one character. And, the scene of Hisao specifically hitting Suzu for the reasons he did, while drunk...

Out of curiosity, how do you think I got Kenji wrong in 6? Hisao being OOC I can completely understand, though (and, unfortunately, it means I failed to do this right). Keep in mind that there's two time skips in there, and I wanted to try to develop Kenji's character. Chapter 6 part 1 is a few mon...

Drunk or not, Hisao seems so OOC in this that I have a hard time reading it without a biased view from that point alone. Decent writing but I'm not sure I like the way the story ended, it was going fine up until chapter 5 but 6 seemed out of character, both for Hisao, Kenji, and even you, it seemed ...

[secretly hopes that Hisao dies] Seriously though, that was a real dick move *nod* I have a strong dislike towards those who strike women over petty relationship crap(and this wasn't even a "you cheated on me" kind of thing) Death to Hisao Although I predict a near-death experience someho...

Hmm, you seem to be intending to limit this to 4 chapters, but from the current pacing and chapter length I'm curious as to how you will fit the rest of the epilogue into 2 chapters without rushing things, you may want to consider more than 4 to wrap things up nicely. I'm a poor writer by anyones st...

I like this, will keep tabs on it!