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So I was fortunate enough to have my eyes on this months ago, or maybe a year ago now? Time's arrow is relentless huh. I thoroughly love this story and always have. Not that I'm surprised, you always bring depth and nuance to your stories that make them profoundly about simple things, human ideas an...

Ok I really love this. It's digestible, in good chunks that don't overstay their welcome. Iwanako comes across as really sympathetic, (A bit mopey but, like, come on ;) that's fair enough). Obviously the premise itself is a bit too coincidental, but i don't really think that matters. The preamble wa...

A good chapter, and a nice little homage to reality by Rika at the end, that sometimes stories are a bit anticlimactic and surgery just goes wrong. The story ends mid sentence. Narratively though it would be a bit dull to end here - which we know you’re not anyway ;) Now if I was writing this, I may...

God. Damn. Wow. Just… Wow. No tears (sorry!), but definitely an aching heart. I’ve always been in awe of your writing, but I truly think this is one of the best, if not the best, stories you’ve written. I am humbled and amazed to think that I might have had even a little bit to do with the creation...

Absolutely adorable! Brilliant upload as always Sharp-O, though I have no idea where its going as always. No drama, just wholesome love, it's adorable. No axes to fall, except maybe Rika's father...

Anyway, thanks a bunch man! Looking forward to more

This was a great one shot, and the potential for more Flutter side quests makes me very happy It was lovely being able to talk with you about this as you were writing it, and the finished story was worth the wait! Fuuka continues to be an amazing OC !

Many thanks!

Hey! Great story, and very evocative emotional tension between Iwanako and Mai. I like the idea that Hisao has someone from his past moving with him to Yamaku, (which i assume is the foreshadow here) and I think the reasoning of Mai's fear is well done. I think that the reveal needed a little more b...

I took on Lap's 2020 prompt and published it in a separate thread. I believe the original was sent to Retro, but I don't really know. Anyway, it comes in at 20K words and is a bit intense, but I hope anyone that stumbles across it enjoys it ahah. https://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=13536 Th...

So if you made it through that some 20K words, well done, and thank you. There's no other community I would want to be a part of, and I hope that you enjoyed this story as much as possible. This was a prompt from Lap in, I think, 2020. It went unfulfilled, and so I thought, seeing as Lap is my frien...

I keep thinking about this river somewhere, with the water moving really fast. And these two people in the water, trying to hold onto each other, holding on as hard as they can, but in the end it’s just too much. The current’s too strong. They’ve got to let go, drift apart. Kazuo Ishiguro, Never Le...

It isn't possible to love and part. You will wish that it was. You can transmute love, ignore it, muddle it, but you can never pull it out of you. I know by experience that the poets are right: love is eternal. E.M Forster, A Room with a View “Are you listening to me, Ritsu?” My father asks. Out of...

Trapped all the Same "A wretched soul, bruised with adversity." https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/636688949607137288/1156750905572601887/Polaroids.png?ex=65161bbb&is=6514ca3b&hm=7cef575150a9ac9dec34c153e4625aa834699b1686a83b47b40657e290dc62cb& "Are memories such an i...

At last, something to entice me back to the renai! And I'm finally getting around to properly reading your work. I suppose I should say as a preliminary that I never really had much of a connection to the fandom characters. I came too late to the game and never got too deep into the fandom. The ups...

I told you my thoughts on this story on the KS server, but posting here because we all love our comments ;) Great story, thought not one I personally engaged with. (Me, not you!). As always I ended up really liking your Shizune, but Rin just felt off to me... Regardless, I did really enjoy the use o...

Adorable update! Off to Rika’s ancestral home then! I do wonder where this is going, but as you say, it’s really quite feel good Rika fluff.