Oh noooooooeeesssssss!!!
On the upside, nicely done, and the art style is kinda cute
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- Fri Feb 17, 2012 9:40 am
- Forum: Fan Art
- Topic: Horrible End Hanako
- Replies: 33
- Views: 19507
- Fri Feb 17, 2012 9:33 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yields Six Servings
- Replies: 24
- Views: 13085
Re: Yields Six Servings
Awww, so cute. "They taste like my feet" has me loling as well :lol
You're really firing out the fan fictions, aren't you
You're really firing out the fan fictions, aren't you
- Thu Feb 16, 2012 6:41 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: New Experiences
- Replies: 81
- Views: 40617
Re: New Experiences
However, I didn't like the way Hanako so suddendly proclaimed she (also?) likes girls. I mean, we knew where the story was going from the beginning but I'd have expected some more build-up and at least another chapter before any kiss. Instead the seizure became even more convenient. Yeah, the 'reve...
- Thu Feb 16, 2012 6:29 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hideaki-kun Crash!
- Replies: 10
- Views: 7778
Re: Hideaki-kun Crash!
Trap yaoi, my sworn enemy, we meet again!!!
- Thu Feb 16, 2012 4:58 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Weekend at Hisao's (Was: At the Train Station) - [Some Porn]
- Replies: 201
- Views: 168276
Re: Weekend at Hisao's (Was: At the Train Station) - [Some P
Really enjoyed this story. And the wedding was great, even though I think I missed a lot of references when talking about Shizune's side of the wedding The drabble was good as always too, and for the love of god, don't stop writing
- Thu Feb 16, 2012 2:38 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: New Experiences
- Replies: 81
- Views: 40617
Re: New Experiences
Thanks to Mirage again for proofreading. :mrgreen: New Experiences Ch 7 “...somewhere else, and escape from reality...” What are we running from? “...felt better since I've made more...” I prefer the blueberry ones. “...didn't have to be nice, but he was, it...” They are nice. I don't need any thou...
- Thu Feb 16, 2012 9:03 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Blind Leading The Blind
- Replies: 74
- Views: 29047
Re: The Blind Leading The Blind
Another good chapter, and there was some typos, but I can't be bothered to search through the whole text for them. Starting to like where the plots going as well, although I'm starting to second guess who the couple's gonna be now. Keep up the good work.
- Wed Feb 15, 2012 7:02 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Of Chocolate and Cupids
- Replies: 22
- Views: 11264
Re: Of Chocolate and Cupids
I think it's quite ironic that people spend ages writing 30,000 word stories, when these are just as good, if not better
Liked the Emi one best though.
Liked the Emi one best though.
- Wed Feb 15, 2012 6:54 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Brogurt's Chocolatey Hanako Fanfiction (Updated Nov 26th)
- Replies: 113
- Views: 47801
Re: Brogurt's Chocolatey Fanfiction (Hanako, 9 Fics)
I enjoyed this; I thought it was kinda cute. But I like your work anyway, so maybe I'm being biased :mrgreen: As for critique, I don't rummage for inconsistencies or mistakes in texts, so I have no negative feedback per say. But as you love criticism, one line did annoy me a wee bit: If what I say n...
- Tue Feb 07, 2012 12:07 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: New Experiences
- Replies: 81
- Views: 40617
Re: New Experiences
I first noticed your fanfic on Fanfiction.net and a small criticism that was levied at it was that it seemed implausible to have Hanako stay in presence of Naomi with only a towel on, as she didn't seem to have progressed enough to feel comfortable that way. After the latest chapter, however, I can...
- Sun Feb 05, 2012 4:27 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: New Experiences
- Replies: 81
- Views: 40617
Re: New Experiences
Something I didn't think about when I first read the chapter: I think epileptics don't usually lose consciousness when they have a seizure. But as you said her case of epilepsy is apparently more serious than usual... I found it really hard to write this bit. I have a friend who has epilepsy, but s...
- Sun Feb 05, 2012 2:52 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
- Replies: 227
- Views: 144411
Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Interesting first chapter. And yes, Hisao is dense. Very, very, veeeerrry dense. lets see where this goes
- Sun Feb 05, 2012 2:29 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: New Experiences
- Replies: 81
- Views: 40617
Re: New Experiences
The seizure honestly seems like overkill. When planning out the story, I actually thought this for a few early versions. But ultimately, Naomi is at Yamaku for her epilepsy, and since people with epilepsy can generally attend regular school, I surmised that hers may be worse than average. This can'...
- Sat Feb 04, 2012 6:02 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: New Experiences
- Replies: 81
- Views: 40617
Re: New Experiences
Yeah, well, it had to happen eventually. Was either this or she got hit by a bus.Guest wrote:Just when things were getting interesting, what a perfectly annoying yet predicable cliffhanger.
- Sat Feb 04, 2012 4:29 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: My First Attempt
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2044
Re: My First Attempt
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