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Finally getting around to commenting on this, which is funny, because you even give thanks to me even though i was evidently being a bit of a prick. Maybe an honest prick. I'm always a bit hesitant when a new author to the forums begins with a story synopsis and a large text dump about what the stor...

Apologies, my comment is long overdue! I adore your little collection here! You know you're doing something right when you draw the compliments and attention of the lovely Brythain ha! In all seriousness, your style is fantastic - and I find that your titles in particular are so punchy and brilliant...

Asoko_Desu wrote: ↑Tue Dec 27, 2022 6:32 pm Years pass, wisdom gained is handed down - loved this; just the right length, and with a character that we see too little of.

Thank you! Glad it went down well. Hope you don't mind, but I stole that little summary for a description of the story!

Ha! A charming little tale indeed! I wonder why I enjoy the insult slinging so throughly, but I truly do! A brilliant story and very very fluffy. Well done!

My submission for Grayest can be found here: https://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=11244&p=248322#p248321 With immense thanks to both Prof, who organises these wonderful secret santa exchanges, and Mirage, who collects them in a lovely anthology. Merry Christmas, happy holidays, and wonde...

With thanks to Prof for organising this wonderful Secret Santa, and with the recipient being Grayest, whose prompt was:

The shopkeeper is secretly Santa clause

I hope you enjoy it and that it does your prompt justice! Merry Christmas my friend!

Love and best wishes from Feurox!

A Glimmer and It’s Gone It had been an unusually warm winter when, by pure coincidence, I discovered a quiet and charming little store called ‘Othello’s Antiques’. The squirrelly looking man behind the counter looked nothing like Othello. I would come to learn his name was Ryuki Domen, though I onl...

Apologies for typos / continuity errors - I stand in the company of giants. You stand firm and tall my friend! What a fantastic Christmas gift that captures the spirit of my prompt wonderfully! The whole piece reads brilliantly, with a charming and warm style, bravo! Miki, slumped in the futon and ...

Ha, as always incredibly written! I'm not fond of this kind of thing usually, but yours always have the right balance of comedy and seriousness that they come across as very believable. A great piece, if a bit graphic in parts for my tastes ha! Oh, and doesn't seem you needed my proofreading at all,...

Couldn't be happier that you received my prompt! Prof's *unbiased* assorting strikes again ha! I really adore what you did with this, and it straddles (fitting word choice really) a thin line between wholesome, tragic and a little creepy. I don't think enough stories do the 'Hisao has gone a little ...

What a brilliant, challenging and complicated piece! No surprises there considering, but man, that got particularly dark. I’m not sure I would have taken the quite dramatic turn you did in the end there, particularly because I think Kenji just realising that Miki is capable of being so apathetic tow...

Utterly beautiful! Cannot get over how well you fuse what is a man-made symbolism with a more 'natural' spiritual world. Tremendous!

Not much to say that wouldn't be repeating myself from the comment I left on this (I'm apparently the latest to comment on it.) It's a strong piece, with an interesting premise. It was a shame it didn't get continued. I'm certainly never going to complain about more Molly :lol: Also, it's actually t...

Horror disguised as cute slightly sexual fun. Well, sexual in a seemingly academic way Fantastic little story, and certainly does the art justice. Very nice indeed, well done Lap!

The Last to Leave Empirically speaking, we are made of star stuff. Why aren’t we talking more about that? Maggie Nelson, The Argonauts The bell rings, and any interest I had managed to encourage in my class immediately dissipates. Chairs screech, and the chatter rises quickly as nearly everyone rac...