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- Tue May 06, 2014 8:35 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Perseverance - (OC) Dead Fic
- Replies: 30
- Views: 12836
Re: Perseverance - (OC)
Solid chapter. Two things are somewhat surprising to me though. It says: The last three weeks have been busy for me. The physical therapy and my friends coming to see me take up most of my time. Yet, Hisao who's his best friend comes only just now? At least it sounds like that's his first visit: &qu...
- Tue Apr 29, 2014 7:42 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Perseverance - (OC) Dead Fic
- Replies: 30
- Views: 12836
Re: Perseverance - (OC)
So far so good I suppose. Yeah. I wanted to create a OC that would take over for Hisao. Dont worry, I have plans for him to resurface later. :D That's, right now, what I'm really interested in though. I've always been thinking about AU scenarios were a completely healthy Hisao meets any of the girls...
- Tue Apr 29, 2014 7:28 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: After the Dream—Rika/Mutou/Akira (Updated 20201109)
- Replies: 107
- Views: 127206
Re: After the Dream—Other Material (Rika completed 20140429)
Yeh, that's gotta be a good 25 years difference at least, right? Or maybe Mutou just looks older than he actually is in the VN. Nice read again and I'm glad this ended on a fairly upbeat note. I seriously have to commend your ability to write so much melancholic stuff in a relatively short time fram...
- Mon Apr 28, 2014 10:36 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Irreversible
- Replies: 20
- Views: 7763
Re: Irreversible
I enjoyed this and actually made me think about how I may have experienced the game if I had approached it like that, that is if such a reverse version existed. I assume I probably wouldn't really have appreciated it much... I mean this kind of backwards scenes order works fantastic for the movie Me...
- Sun Apr 27, 2014 12:30 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Former Sisterhood thread
- Replies: 515
- Views: 275632
Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
Look at the second comment on this page:
If it's a consolation: IF I'd write something else, it'd probably be an expansion to this story that would pretty much pick up where things were left off here.
- Fri Apr 25, 2014 6:20 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 732897
Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 39 up 4/
Sigh, I wish all those anime harem shows could have this kind of writing. You know, actual plot and character progression that comes from characters actually taking active steps and speaking their mind as opposed to the usual idiot plot where basically everything happens out of misunderstandings. Th...
- Thu Apr 24, 2014 11:48 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 732897
Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 38 up 4/
Yeh, better hurry up dewelar, wouldn't wanna get into trouble with this guy!Thanks for reading and reply soon
- Sat Apr 12, 2014 4:37 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: After the Dream—Misha's Arc/Na-chan's Story (#4 up 20170121)
- Replies: 43
- Views: 61107
Re: After the Dream—Misha's Arc (Part 1 up 20140413)
Time for me to say thay I really enjoy your After the Dream series. This MIsha opening was another strong one. I have to say though, I usually enjoy even the sad stories quite a bit but there's so much sadness and melancholy in a lot of these pieces, it almost becomes a tad too much for me. Especial...
- Fri Apr 11, 2014 4:12 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 732897
Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 38 up 4/
Man that was good.
Really love this sentence.It's not really a lie, but if he takes it the way I want him to take it, then it kind of is.
- Wed Apr 02, 2014 10:08 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 854
- Views: 476535
Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/02/14 ~ Reactivated
Come on, people. That was like most obvious 1st April prank ever. Why anyone even was unsure about it is beyond me. :roll: My problem wasn't the, indeed quite obvious, prank itself but the fact that I just thought the chapter was called "Abandoned" and was looking forward to reading it a ...
- Wed Apr 02, 2014 5:38 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 854
- Views: 476535
Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/02/14 ~ Reactivated
Man, yesterday night I was like "Oh cool, another tomorrow's doom chapter. 'Abandoned' hmm? Wonder how this chapter's title is going to make sense. Well, I'm gonna read that on my tablet before I sleep."
Later:
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- Sun Mar 23, 2014 5:01 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 865319
Re: Yamaku Book Club
Ahh, I've read that before and quite liked it if I recall correctly. Gotta go over it again though to be up to the details.
- Wed Mar 19, 2014 7:24 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 865319
Re: Yamaku Book Club
So I'm not sure if it's a requirement to read the entire story to partake in these discussions but similarly to dewelar I also quit reading around chapter 4 or 5. Was surprised I haven't read this one yet but must've managed to slip by. One of my major concern going into this was that another KS-lit...
- Sat Mar 15, 2014 11:49 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 732897
Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 36 up 3/
Good job, as always. Love these awkward situations where everyone is thinking about the same topic, here everyone's relationship to one another, but can't quite simple bring it up. When it's just two there's some limited information exchange but when all three are present everyone acts like everythi...
- Fri Mar 07, 2014 5:26 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Reunion - A Hanako Bad Ending Epilogue
- Replies: 15
- Views: 6927
Re: Reunion - A Hanako Bad Ending Epilogue
A one shot titled "Reunion" that doesn't end on an extremely sad note? Color me surprised! I take a quick look at the sheet of paper given to me at the sign in desk of Yamaku Academy. Should be sign-in desk I think. It definitely has been a while, and things are a lot more different than w...