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by Bad Apple
Fri Feb 07, 2014 9:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 585
Views: 483339

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 1/18)

As a gigging jazz musician, MRAs have reduced me to bringing the actual derby mute to gigs because I generally don't want to wear fedoras anywhere to use instead. This. Thanks to those circle-jerking, irrelevant bed-wetters, no man (myself included) can wear fedoras anymore without fear of this neo...
by Bad Apple
Thu Feb 06, 2014 10:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)
Replies: 80
Views: 37500

Re: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 9 2014-02-06)

So... anyone writing Mystery-sanxHanako WAFF yet? It is my understanding that fandoms have a neurotic tendency to do this kind of thing. No? What do you mean, what's wrong with me ? ... All right, guess I'll just have to comment OT then. Lilly's phone call was an unexpected twist. Wonder what that'...
by Bad Apple
Wed Feb 05, 2014 11:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 421876

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 11/20/2013}

Fan music awesomeness Lovely piano playing -- nice and soft, no harsh notes. Just the way I like it. I particularly enjoy the turn past the 40-second mark. "Breakdown, Pt. 1" is vaguely reminiscent of "Painful History", I think. Was that intentional? While we're at it, I just wa...
by Bad Apple
Sun Feb 02, 2014 10:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)
Replies: 80
Views: 37500

Re: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 7 2014-02-02)

I decide to start with the bacon, albeit with a bit of trepidation. I take the first bite. Huh, they actually made it crispy enough. God I'm terrible Akira looks at me, slightly shocked, and then returns to her own breakfast. "Wh.. what, is the bacon too crispy for you?" "No, it's ju...
by Bad Apple
Sun Feb 02, 2014 3:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)
Replies: 80
Views: 37500

Re: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 6 2014-02-01)

Something brown and smelly is getting dangerously close to the fan, and Hisao looks far more terrified than I am. Finally! Hanako's been waiting years for this! I'm so sorry I'll admit, I don't have a thing for implausible scenarios or illogical premises. (The plausibility of this scenario is, I th...
by Bad Apple
Sat Feb 01, 2014 11:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 421876

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 11/20/2013}

Leaty wrote:Meh. Not really.
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Is this a Fanfiction.Net feature or some writing software I've never seen before?
by Bad Apple
Mon Jan 20, 2014 9:43 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4989
Views: 4878087

Re: Ask!

...And thus, Emisha was officially born... My God, what have you done! You act as if it wasn't already a thing. A search of the fanfiction forum would demonstrate otherwise. With emphasis on officially if I may be so bold... Just like I "officially" could not resist making a godawful roma...
by Bad Apple
Sun Jan 19, 2014 10:25 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4989
Views: 4878087

Re: Ask!

Heh. I thought that comment meant that Emi and Misha had been friends with benefits at one point. I may have been reading a little too much into it :-) Ha ha ha yes how ridiculous. <_< >_> ...And thus, Emisha was officially born... My God, what have you done! The story of 4LS is quite remarkable. M...
by Bad Apple
Sat Jan 11, 2014 6:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meeting Lyle
Replies: 30
Views: 10872

Re: Meeting Lyle

Since nobody else is doing it, I'll offer some constructive criticism. Lyle doesn't come off to me as being British, or indeed English, but as having an Australian accent. Despite their shared origin, there are a few nuances between the two in speech and phrases that I couldn't quite explain to you ...
by Bad Apple
Sat Dec 28, 2013 11:18 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4989
Views: 4878087

Re: Ask!

Erenussocrates wrote:Uhh. I couldn't find that inspiration map
http://www.katawa-shoujo.com/webstorage ... _final.jpg
by Bad Apple
Fri Dec 27, 2013 9:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 421876

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 11/20/2013}

Right then, I can stop there. I dislike how often I start a comment with "Iwanako", but it seems ridiculous to write all the Katawa Shoujo tropes over again. I'll figure it all out later. Dude, no need to doublepost; that's what the edit button is for. As for the TVTropes entry, I noticed...
by Bad Apple
Fri Dec 27, 2013 9:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 185146

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 24/12/2013)

A neutral good Christmas present, if I may say so myself. I liked the bittersweetness of it. Your Hanako has a sort of weird logic of her own. It makes the reader sympathize with her at face value, even when she herself acknowledges her logic is "paradoxical." This is going at a decent pac...
by Bad Apple
Thu Dec 19, 2013 1:17 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4989
Views: 4878087

Re: Ask!

First, did any of the devs played the whole game? Like, the last build, the final product. No just to check if everything was alright, but to just play it. I'm guessing that after creating the routes and finishing making the game, you didn't actually want to play it at all. Five years is a really l...
by Bad Apple
Mon Dec 16, 2013 2:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Emi in Wonderland
Replies: 50
Views: 27296

Re: Emi in Wonderland

Welp, since half the forum has decided to hijack another fanfiction thread on such short notice, I might as well ask. The only real travesty here is: "Why are you posting such short chapters every few hours if the fanfiction is complete?" I get there's a word limit per post but you're not ...
by Bad Apple
Wed Nov 27, 2013 1:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 185146

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 12/11/2013)

Awful lot of updates in November; couple that with a multi-week absence and you have me almost losing this thread! Decent update as always. Hadn't thought of the good-neutral ending dynamic until now, but I did always expect the order to be Bad, Neutral, Good. It'll be very interesting to see Hanako...