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I prefer Modern over Standard and I'll take Commander over all of them any day of the week.

Anyway! Them's some good ficlets. A++ would read again.

Also, I have no idea what Tanto Cuore or Dominion is. Could someone explain?

Grand Haberdasher wrote:On the other hand, blood-based paint is a good choice if you want to use something non-synthetic. Holds up well against weather and such.

Do we want to know how you know that? >_>

While I'm not into Type-Moon myself, I have a passing familiarity with Fate/Stay Night. Enough of one to get a laugh out of this. Well played.

I read this one awhile back. And I really enjoyed it. I'm glad you posted here.

Robnonymous wrote:I seem to recall you saying that the majority of your writing sucks. Are you insane???

A lot of amateur writers - myself including - often say that their own work sucks, especially when it's pretty good. We tend to be our own harshest critics.

I almost didn't read this one because of the thread title. But I'm glad I did.

You're getting better at capturing Rin's tone. This is a very well-composed little piece.

Okay, so, be honest with us.

Are you Jesus?

(Nice Lilly, too. Yeah, it's not perfect, but perfection is not always attainable. She obviously put in a lot of effort. )

This is definitely looking interesting, but I'm just gonna warn you. If this story turns into Final Destination, I quit.

Looks like this could shape up to be interesting. There's a couple of grammatical snafus (some periods where there should be commas in dialog, for one) but overall it's well-composed.

I totally bought that album.

Nicely done.

I feel bad for laughing at that second one. >_>

The Gurren Lagann one made me laugh out loud.

You're not the first. But you definitely did it well!

(Also, Homestuck fan, I see? *bunp*)

Wishing no disrespect, I'm inclined to agree with what many others have said much more eloquently than I could. The revised version reads as a bit more forced.

"Maybe my feet are fireworks" is just so undeniably Rin. Very nice story.