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Currently, I am done with page four of this thread. That's like five or six chapters or thereabouts. I'm not enjoying it. The remarkably frequent pop-culture references, both as part of Aaron's inner monologue and as part of the dialogue and narrative, are incredibly distracting and feel out of pla...

Hoitash wrote:

DanjaDoom wrote: "Oh, silly me, I got the diet shampoo."-Squidward Tentacles

That's all I got.

I understand you so much better now .

I'm not a hard man to understand.

Uhm... so how about... huh... It's hard to think of witty openers. This is why I tend to use quotes (trick I learned in English class.) I'll volunteer a couple from Oscar Wilde... I am so clever that sometimes I don't understand a single word of what I am saying. How can a woman be expected to be h...

Uhm... so how about... huh... It's hard to think of witty openers. Chapter 15: Nobody Likes You When You're Eighteen “You miss 100% of the shots you don’t take...” “Every strike brings me closer to the next home run...” “It’s okay to feel sad...” I close my laptop screen shut and sigh. For the last ...

Helbereth wrote:

DanjaDoom wrote:>Hisao not buying motorcycle engagement rings
>Hanako not buying a giant rideable chess piece

Unacceptable.

DanjaDoom not working on more Hideaki/Suzu shenanigans?

Unacceptable!

If you must know, I'm working on both right as we speak... type. Whatever.

>Hisao not buying motorcycle engagement rings
>Hanako not buying a giant rideable chess piece

Unacceptable.

Etokie wrote:What is this? A post of fiction from the lovely Hoitash and none has commented? This is an outrage! I demand to see the gods about this glitch on their watch!!!

For some reason I thought I did D: *shame*

But, yes, an awesome chapter. I hope to see more more wanton money spending coming up!

Just finished reading this thing. It's very enjoyable, even if it deviates from the headcanon I have from Scissorlips' Suzu. To be honest, I like your interpretation better in some ways. She's more independent, for one, and she comes across as less.. depressed, I guess you could say. I also like ho...

Considering I sort of' hurried this chapter along before I had to leave for my aforementioned road trip, I'm pleasantly surprised by all the great feedback. Things done at the last minute turn out either fantastically or horrendously. •Former | fôrmər | (former) denoting the first mentioned of two ...

“I guess it just never came up as an option. I figured no one would really pay much attention to me, so why try?” Been there, man. Very nice chapter; you're little group interacts well (and hilariously) :). Considering I sort of' hurried this chapter along before I had to leave for my aforementione...

Was anyone else paying attention to the symbolism of Molly coming out of the closet? I mean, it was part of the scene and fit right into how it played out, but... I'll go back in my hole now... I am honestly surprised Aaron didn't make a snarky comment about it, actually. Or Miki for that matter. T...

Borderlands 2 wasn't out in '07, otherwise a very enjoyable chapter as expected. Nice character progression. Looking forward to the next installment. Huh. I've always had my stories written concurrent with the 2010's, so I guess the actual time period of the game just slips my mind. Maybe you can t...

Before I leave on a fourteen hour road trip, enjoy this fun little chapter. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ “Molly, I’m just going to tell you that your tits look great no matter what you put on. You may as well just give up.” Sigh and eye roll, followed by a toss of her undergarments into a pile. I have her down pat...

Something I thought of, that may be contributing to the fast development of their relationship. With Hisao doing the "I'll always be here" and whatnot. While this is incredibly sweet, she's feeding right in to his White Knight complex. It seems like Ritsu is holding out for a hero, though...

Good chapter, but there were a lot of lines that could have been grouped together instead of being standalone.

In other words, your dialogue is ronery.