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There was only once choice that was poorly worded.
The romance angle was practically non existent.
It contained the two most annoying side characters in the game (Hideaki and Jigoro)
There was no real character growth.
In general, nothing really happened for the majority of the story.

The smut stuff isn't typically my thing. I guess it was okay for what it was. There was one glaring mistake in the first story though. “Like what you see?” She asks breathily, and I’m vaguely aware of her hands pulling off my tie Her hands? Plural? Miki? Oops. The fluffy Lilly story I did like thoug...

That said, as I understood board norms, short stories go in one folder, longer stories go in folders on their own. There's not really a "norm" on this. Different people do different things. Some people give each of their short stories a different topic. Some include their short work in th...

I'll agree that the title is perfect. The story is generally nice, short, and sweet, although everytime I saw "Ibarazaki-chan" it threw me a little.

Well, the re-lighting part is pretty good although it does make the skin tone on her face look slightly off.

That was all in gimp? That must have took some work.

apackofbadgers wrote: ↑Wed Feb 16, 2022 2:22 am Missed the anniversary, big sad.

There seems to be some texture on this one. Was this like an actual painted piece?

Interesting. How exactly did you go about doing that?

Now that you've pointed it out I've got no idea how I missed it, and I've honestly got no excuse for it. It's something I should have caught before posting it and I'll own up to that. Should be fixed now though.

It happens. Don't worry too much about it, just be more careful next time.

It's a cute little story, but you really need to watch your tenses.

Also, just to make it a bit easier to read, you might want to leave a blank space between lines when you start a new paragraph.

In the regular files, not the fragments, you present Kenji in an interesting way. He seems less like his typical paranoid self and more along the lines of a Lovecraft protagonist. Somebody calm and serious, but who has seem some real nasty stuff and is slowly loosing his grip. It's an interesting fe...

Considering Hisao just had a major heart attack I would assume most people went running to be healthy, which of course means Emi :P The first time I played it, I thought Hisao pushing himself was the last thing he needed to do. The guy just got out of the hospital, he doesn't need to do anything to...

Considering Hisao just had a major heart attack I would assume most people went running to be healthy, which of course means Emi :P The first time I played it, I thought Hisao pushing himself was the last thing he needed to do. The guy just got out of the hospital, he doesn't need to do anything to...

I love the set up for No Good Deed , and the fact that it ends in a pie-fight. You don't see that too often in stories. If anything, the story ended much too soon. This is the kind of thing I could easily see lasting for several chapters without wearing out its welcome. Any Flavor But Lemon was ... ...

Rin's a bit more vulgar than I'm used to but I do like the mental tricks she uses.