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What a fantastic surprise to come home to today! Excellent work, as always Trivun. I was especially pleased with how you added in the return trip she took to the antiques store as a way of expressing her growing confidence. I have faith that you'll finish this story strong in the coming months, and ...

Thanatos02 wrote:Heads up, this coming chapter is almost 15,000 words. I might have to release it in two parts because it's so gigantic.
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I hope everyone's looking forward to it. It's going to be a monster to edit

You're doing god's work, sir. I anxiously await this next update!

An excellent update, as always! You're portrayal of Hanako is an almost perfect match for how I imagine her in my mind.

That April Fool's update got me. Not bad, Professor. Not bad at all!

Trivun wrote:do something useful and relevant with my life

This story most certainly qualifies as relevant in my opinion.
Anxious to read your next update, Sir Trivun!

while I do appreciate the compliments on what I've done so far, I have mixed feelings when someone says "I like your version better," you know? Oh no you misunderstood. I like both fairly equally. Thermo's was just appealing to my sense of dark humor while your's appeals to me in a more c...

GorisTheKing wrote:Keep it up, enjoying these updates. She seems to be quite similarly constructed to Lilly, I prefer that to themocaw's extroverted interpretation.

I must be the only one who kind of liked the dark-edged, outgoing Saki then. ;_;

No problem! Since I can't do that, I might as well have someone (in character) point out whenever he goes into one of his famous "master of romance" moments :lol: Saki does seem to be a wonderful way to make Hisao see he's being an idiot. Oh, and don't stress out by that, I mean apologize ...

Oh my god, definitely worth the wait. “I know it takes time to adjust. But you know what? Purposely going out of your way to treat someone like they're some sort of, I don't know, 'extra-normal' person makes them feel ten times worse, and just rubs it in that they aren't.” Her voice lowers as she gl...

I was worried that there would be a bit of discontent with the lack of action in this scene haha. "Lack of action" disappointment was more than overcome by how Akira opened up to Hisao. The backstory here was made better without "action". It makes it seem more sincere and realis...

Could this be... what I hoped for all along? YES! Oh sweet salty christ, I'm practically vibrating in place in anticipation of the next chapter. Your writing style and characterization of Hanako is fantastic as always. Thank you for putting so much effort into this, Trivun. I for one greatly apprec...

This is an excellent way to end a long night at work! Thanks for another great chapter, Thanatos. Really liking the whole conflict with "did I get this job just because dad wanted to control me?" And also how Hisao is so damned awkward about bringing up their sex life.

Liking this Saki a lot! Hope this story takes off soon.

Trivun wrote:Definitely before the end of the following week though. I'll try and make it as soon as possible, but I don't want to rush through it

That is actually much sooner than I expected, thank you! No need to rush, quality over delivery date is always appreciated in my book.

Oh god, I approve of this so much. I made an account just to say thank you for this fantastic side of the story. Thanks for the support, and I'm actually pretty proud that I was the specific cause of someone creating an account on here :). Makes me feel a bit like Yahtzee Croshaw... (him being the ...