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by xaolindragon
Sat Jan 28, 2012 8:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: First Try
Replies: 9
Views: 4184

Re: First Try

“She have a cane, with a sword in it. She’s better off than you,” he whispered to me. I think it should be "has" instead of "have". And my opinion about this: I like it, I think. Well to word it better, I'm intrigued by this. A lot of the fan fics here is mostly about possible r...
by xaolindragon
Sat Jan 28, 2012 2:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Griffon8's Writing | New: We DeepEnd On Each Other
Replies: 19
Views: 21454

Re: Griffon8's Writing Center | New: The Decision

Massive amounts of feels, man. And goddamn do I really need to hurry up and finish Rin's story to get to Lilly's (saving best for last :P) Dammit man! What the hell are you doing wasting time on the forums when you aren't done with the game yet? :shock: Very good point. I think it's mostly a combin...
by xaolindragon
Sat Jan 28, 2012 11:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Griffon8's Writing | New: We DeepEnd On Each Other
Replies: 19
Views: 21454

Re: Griffon8's Writing Center | New: The Decision

Massive amounts of feels, man. And goddamn do I really need to hurry up and finish Rin's story to get to Lilly's (saving best for last :P)
by xaolindragon
Sat Jan 28, 2012 12:39 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The Hanako Thread - Spoilers, obviously
Replies: 641
Views: 207091

Re: The Hanako Thread - Spoilers, obviously

While the first girl I ever slept with wasn't a virgin, I played things as if she were and did my best to make her feel comfortable, something which she found endearing. Hisao twisted Hanako into some kind of awkward position for penetration and couldn't even get her panties and nylons off. Ye god....
by xaolindragon
Fri Jan 27, 2012 7:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Griffon8's Writing | New: We DeepEnd On Each Other
Replies: 19
Views: 21454

Re: Griffon8's Writing Center

I just read through the Emi story. I enjoyed it quite a bit. Currently, I'm in the Shizune one. I have to say, I wasn't expecting how it turned out. You just earned yourself +1 fan. :)
by xaolindragon
Fri Jan 27, 2012 5:03 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The Hanako Thread - Spoilers, obviously
Replies: 641
Views: 207091

Re: The Hanako Thread - Spoilers, obviously

I really wish we'd been given some branching paths and interactivity during that sex scene , at least. I would've loved to try and finesse my way through it. What. O.o I'd actually rather not turn KS into a full-on H-game. I said that, not Rivan. And I'm not talking about depraved sexual fantasies,...
by xaolindragon
Fri Jan 27, 2012 10:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Blind Leading The Blind
Replies: 74
Views: 28845

Re: The Blind Leading The Blind

Aaaawww yeeaah. Is it just me or are hints at a yuri plot becoming more and more popular in fan fics? I know there's a few others one that took a story in that direction. Not that I have a problem; it makes everything more interesting. Keep it up!
by xaolindragon
Fri Jan 27, 2012 10:31 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The Hanako Thread - Spoilers, obviously
Replies: 641
Views: 207091

Re: The Hanako Thread - Spoilers, obviously

I really wish we'd been given some branching paths and interactivity during that sex scene , at least. I would've loved to try and finesse my way through it. What. O.o I'd actually rather not turn KS into a full-on H-game. You know, you shoud really cut back on the insults, name-calling and the alm...
by xaolindragon
Thu Jan 26, 2012 2:22 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4989
Views: 4424123

Re: Ask!

About Lilly's dreams: first of all, I want to say that I liked this dialogue in particular because it contributes significantly to make her all the more real to me, by showing that she's preoccupied with small things and aspects of her disability despite being outwardly grounded (perhaps to a fault...
by xaolindragon
Thu Jan 26, 2012 12:56 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The Hanako Thread - Spoilers, obviously
Replies: 641
Views: 207091

Re: The Hanako Thread - Spoilers, obviously

Keep in mind that the game has been touted as an eroge since the beginning, and technically Hisao hadn't fucked anything yet and the path was about to end. Not sure if much else needs saying. The point is, despite it being an eroge, you wouldn't be missing anything important if you decided to turn ...
by xaolindragon
Wed Jan 25, 2012 8:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Brogurt's Chocolatey Hanako Fanfiction (Updated Nov 26th)
Replies: 113
Views: 47563

Re: Brogurt's Six Songs of Hanako

Brogurt wrote:YOU’LL NEVER GET ME TO WRITE SMUT.
And for that, I appreciate you and your writing. Thank you.
by xaolindragon
Wed Jan 25, 2012 7:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: New Experiences
Replies: 81
Views: 38883

Re: New Experiences

I have to say I was pretty surprised with the way the character became. Not that I have a problem with that she's lesbian, but it just kinda took me by surprise.

Regardless, I'm loving this story. I love the pacing; it's nice and slow. Nothing seems rushed. Keep it up!
by xaolindragon
Wed Jan 25, 2012 10:36 am
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Fun with Photoshop
Replies: 535
Views: 222106

Re: Fun with Photoshop

Here's a spoilerific thought, if Hisao helps Hanako come out of her shell in both Hanako and Lily route what happens to Hanako in the other three routes? Shall we stop by and see? http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j28/Dark-Evangelion/Katawa%20Shoujo/yanderehanako.jpg Remember children, this will ha...
by xaolindragon
Tue Jan 24, 2012 10:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Pearly Whites
Replies: 24
Views: 12002

Re: Pearly Whites

I was about to say. I liked the story up until she started stripping because honestly, what kind of girl wants to fuck that quickly after someone confesses to her?

And then my face went to: http://i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/new ... 1316467507
by xaolindragon
Tue Jan 24, 2012 12:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Closure
Replies: 58
Views: 69826

Re: Closure

My goodness. Honestly best fan fic goes to this one. I'm completely speechless over how good this is. So many feels. When I read the part about what happened to Shizune, I actually had to take a 30 minute break just to recuperate. This one's a keeper. Saved. EDIT: Oh. I've thought about this for a f...