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by Bagheera
Sun May 19, 2013 10:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 716846

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 5/3]

It's your work. You should post it when you're satisfied, and not a moment sooner. Not like your readers are going anywhere.
by Bagheera
Sun May 19, 2013 8:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
Replies: 202
Views: 97056

Re: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]

I meant to imply that Miya's mother actually met Rin, in much the same function as she met Hisao now. Huh. For some reason I was under the impression that was a phonecall sort of meeting and that the mother mistakenly thought Rin was actually Miya pretending to be her own friend, for the mother's s...
by Bagheera
Sat May 18, 2013 1:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
Replies: 202
Views: 97056

Re: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]

Big info dump here, which was great. I was a little disappointed that Hisao left things like that; offering her some sort of hope might have been nice. But perhaps the very fact that they had that conversation already accomplished that end? I also noticed a couple of typos, and several instance of m...
by Bagheera
Thu May 16, 2013 3:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 716846

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 5/3]

God dammit Thanatos! When this is over I hope you continue to write more routes/fics. I think I speak for alot of us when I say your akira route is one we must check for updates as soon as we log in. Maybe you can break the curse of the miki route. I don't know if I plan to keep on writing after th...
by Bagheera
Tue May 14, 2013 8:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 585
Views: 483293

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 4/8)

Fans are pushy, it's the nature of the beast. But pay us no mind; share your story when you're ready and not a moment before. We'll be here.
by Bagheera
Mon Apr 22, 2013 7:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
Replies: 202
Views: 97056

Re: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]

This is going to sound weird, but I found this chapter . . . inspiring, I guess? No so much in the particulars as in the fact that both Miya's mother and some guy she doesn't really know are willing to go to this much trouble to understand her. That rarely happens in real life; typically people will...
by Bagheera
Wed Apr 17, 2013 6:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
Replies: 202
Views: 97056

Re: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]

I can't promise a schedule, but rest assured, I'm going to finish this story. Hooray! Well, I've said it before, but it bears repeating: I'll be along for the ride, no matter how long it takes. Don't feel rushed at all; just post what you can when you're satisfied with the result and we'll be happy.
by Bagheera
Thu Jan 31, 2013 10:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route
Replies: 153
Views: 109480

Re: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route

So I was hanging out in KS Generals, and the question of whether any other writers can pick this up came up. The answer is yes. Anyone who has the inclination to do so can pick up from where I left off. If you've got the time and energy I don't, then go for it and more power to you. Feel free to us...
by Bagheera
Sat Jan 19, 2013 8:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
Replies: 202
Views: 97056

Re: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]

Please don't give up on it! This is an excellent story, one well worth telling IMO. It would be a shame to lose it.
by Bagheera
Tue Jan 08, 2013 1:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route
Replies: 153
Views: 109480

Re: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route

Argh! I feel like there's a part 2 to this, where Saki and Hisao hash things out. The story seems less like a post-bad end coda than it does a "well that sucked, but neither of us want things to end like that, so . . ." sort of thing.

Or maybe I'm just an incurable optimist, heh.
by Bagheera
Mon Dec 17, 2012 6:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route
Replies: 153
Views: 109480

Re: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route

Aw, that makes me sad. :( Well, we got the drabbles and a good run on the rest, so I can't complain; if you're not feeling it you're just not feeling it. I don't think you'll have to worry about lack of interest if you ever get around to finishing it, though! :D
by Bagheera
Thu Dec 06, 2012 9:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 585
Views: 483293

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 11/29)

This is amazingly good stuff. Misha seems spot on, and I didn't have any issues with Rin at all (that was a cold thing to say, but I doubt Rin meant it like that). And your Shizune . . . she seems a bit softer than the Shizune in the game, which is a good thing IMO. I could never connect with canon!...
by Bagheera
Tue Nov 20, 2012 9:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 916
Views: 723640

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 11/11)

Forgot most obvious choice:

[X] Get Hisao and go after Kenji together.

Deals with all the issues at once I think.

But anyway another great chapter! Hope Suzu tackles the bear that is career survey soon.
by Bagheera
Sun Nov 18, 2012 4:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
Replies: 202
Views: 97056

Re: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]

Miya's reaction to that might be, depending on context, anticlimactic. I'd be interested what sort of resolution on Hisao's part could bring forth such a line. He'd have to know what he wants. Actually, in some extended sense this might be the theme of part 4. Not sure if I interpret the line right...
by Bagheera
Fri Nov 09, 2012 10:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
Replies: 202
Views: 97056

Re: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]

I think it'd be neat if, at some point, Hisao threw Miya a curveball and said something like "I'd like to try not pretending." I wonder if she'd even know what to do at that point.