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HisaoRikaStream.png To see one's own story immortalized in art is the ultimate compliment, BlackWaltz. You're the second person to draw a scene from this story and the first one (I think) who has actually read it. I realize it's a rough drawing because you used your notepad, but I love the choice o...

tips on Japanese culture These links are immensely helpful, especially the etiquette one. Thank you! I've found researching Japanese culture is surprisingly difficult and the devil is always in the details. I would kill for a list of minutiae of everyday life in Japan, such as food, clothes. And th...

“It was a haiku. By an aphasic poet. I think it was pretty good. Don’t you?” Why is this last bit so halting and punctuated? It seems rather oddly out of place that this is 4 sentences rather than 2. Other than that, good times! You're right. It sounds a little bit "black wheelchair kid from M...

One thing - do you think Japanese people say "Oh My God?" Serious question because I don't know either. They say it all the time in KS... I've seen it at least a dozen times so far while translating Emi's path. Yeah, I thought it sounded familiar. My "guy who hasn't played KS since l...

Ahh yes. I had the choice to either go easy on the nouns, or not to. I chose not to because I'm imitating the style of the original routes, which themselves shift a bit on the descriptive side when it comes to the sex. On the other hand I'm pretty inexperienced writing this sort of thing, so that mi...

Pushing the limits of appropriate word count here. More bang for your buck. Also, adult content warning in this one. Tread lightly. Also, author's note: "different" is a 3 syllable word. Edit: I got rid of some sexy, sexy nouns. Pray I don't alter it further. Scene 3: Magnum Opus As we wal...

This is really superb. Your Miki is so BRO-MODE and I love her. Her chemistry with Suzu is excellent. I was grinning like an idiot while I was reading the scene in her bedroom. I love all the substance you're giving Suzu. The way you describe her bedroom, with pillows everywhere, the way she feigns ...

Well this sure isn't your average stroke story. lololol Saw the Nurse thing a mile away but I still had my doubts. I think you used just the right amount of hinting without giving it away entirely. Looking forward to meeting the other guests of the hospital. I think that's where it's going to get in...

Very interesting premise. Sad that the visits tapered off after the first while but 21 months is a long time.

I'm not sure where you're going with this but I can't wait to see. Very suspenseful.

And good prose, too, especially for a first story.

Can't wait to see the next part, good writing so far. Ok. Since it's been so long since my last update I wanted to post a bit more this time around, but I might as well post what I've got so far. Here is the introduction to Act 4. P.S. - I had been AWOL for a while because of school, interviews, an...

Thanks for the feedback, everyone. Much appreciated. Hahaha it's all in good fun. Sorry all fan fiction writers, we don't mean to rush you :) I wasn't upset by any of it, for what it's worth. I could see how it might bother some writers, but I find it flattering and it helps me stay motivated. But i...

After wrestling his hand from Yuuko's grasp, he wrapped both of them around the crying woman, looking solemn and defeated. Blushing heavily, he spoke. “Y-yuuko, I fucked up. I-... I just fucked up. I left you alone that n-night, and never even b-bothered to call you.” He stammered as he tried to co...

http://i.imgur.com/C94Iv.png Scene 13: Shadows at Noon It’s not often I sleep past dawn, even on a Sunday. Emi’s iron grip on my morning routine has done a decent enough job of training my body to rise at the break of dawn. Between this and Rika’s penchant for late night excursions, it’s a wonder I...

Right now, in our "good end" route we have all the inertia of a train wreck. hey, guys, let's experiment with our heart medication! this is a great idea! They are both moronic teenagers. Rika's got a messed-up death fixation and Hisao's got a penis. So far this branch isn't showing a lot ...

Quick question though, Act 3 is the equivalent of Act 4 in the VN though, right? Usually if you fuck up and get the bad ending, you don't make it past Act 3. I think I was unclear. Act 3 is going to probably be done in the next installment but Act 4 is yet to come. Act 4 will contain another branch...