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by ArazelEternal
Tue Feb 23, 2016 10:11 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4862
Views: 1412407

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

Hi there.. I'm new on here.. i've just discovered this board and this topic just.. I want to tell you a story. I'm a 21 year old male. Decently attractive i suppose, never had a girlfriend, never came close to having one either. That's not why im writing this. At 20 I moved away from my parents hou...
by ArazelEternal
Mon Feb 22, 2016 1:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 5 Added 2-28-2016)
Replies: 33
Views: 20422

Re: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 4 Added 2-21-2

leaving Hanako and I behind in the store. ... and if she is jealous of Hanako and I ... and how she feels about Hanako and I. Hanako and me - in all three cases How do I get someone who doesn't want to see me to talk to me? It's not that she doesn't want to see him... And really... Miki? That rumou...
by ArazelEternal
Sun Feb 21, 2016 5:42 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Birthday!
Replies: 927
Views: 372566

Re: Birthday!

Miki, Happy Birthday. Lils, as well though pretty belated.
by ArazelEternal
Sun Feb 21, 2016 5:38 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Went back and got that good Rin ending.
Replies: 9
Views: 8021

Re: Went back and got that good Rin ending.

My reading of the good Rin ending is that Hisao had given up on the relationship by the time of the final scene, and *Rin* rescues the relationship in the end. For me, it feels like they each rescue it for the other, without even knowing that they've done so. Extraordinarily appropriate. This is ho...
by ArazelEternal
Sun Feb 21, 2016 1:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 5 Added 2-28-2016)
Replies: 33
Views: 20422

Re: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 4)

*THUD* My fist violently silences the blaring in my ears that is my alarm clock. The damned thing brings an all too early end to a night of fitful sleep. It seems that darkness is not my friend as of late. Even when tired I have trouble actually sleeping. I doubt my pills were all there was to blame...
by ArazelEternal
Sat Feb 13, 2016 10:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 5 Added 2-28-2016)
Replies: 33
Views: 20422

Chapter 3

*sigh* I wipe my forehead and the back of my hand glistens with the moisture of my sweat. A supremely hot day. I'm not the only one though. Everyone seems to share in my discomfort as I gaze around the room. Once again, Misha is holding her shirt open and using her notebook to fan herself down. I wo...
by ArazelEternal
Wed Feb 10, 2016 1:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 5 Added 2-28-2016)
Replies: 33
Views: 20422

Re: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 2 Added 2-9-20

If you or other people can provide constructive criticism and tips without coming across as condescending (your not, at least not yet) I would appreciate it. I truly do not intend to condescend. I think I have a few problems with reading your material. Here are the two main ones: 1) You don't use c...
by ArazelEternal
Wed Feb 10, 2016 11:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 5 Added 2-28-2016)
Replies: 33
Views: 20422

Re: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 2 Added 2-9-20

I would appreciate some pointers then. I thought it was fine (my story o surprise. I know how its supposed to go.) Ive always had trouble getting things out in a way that really makes sense to other people. The first chapter i wrote then reviewed myself. The second I wrote, reviewed, then had one of...
by ArazelEternal
Wed Feb 10, 2016 9:19 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 5 Added 2-28-2016)
Replies: 33
Views: 20422

Re: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 2 Added 2-9-20

Well, thinking about protection the first time won't do them much good, if they already forget about it the second time... Also... A H-scene already? Really? Mirage, please, please do your usual editing job. It's painful to read. :) I thought I might get some comments like this, lol. Oh well. Im no...
by ArazelEternal
Tue Feb 09, 2016 11:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 5 Added 2-28-2016)
Replies: 33
Views: 20422

Re: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 2)

The day that Lilly returns from Scotland comes. Hanako and I meet up after class lets out for the day. Walking hand in hand, we make our way to our dorm rooms to change. I go first, her following behind into my room. I just change my shirt and put on my sweater vest, deciding to keep it simple. Not ...
by ArazelEternal
Mon Feb 08, 2016 1:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 5 Added 2-28-2016)
Replies: 33
Views: 20422

Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 5 Added 2-28-2016)

“Hisao…. I want to give you…. this one gift. Please accept my gift to you….” Hanako places her hands on my shoulders and leans in, giving me a kiss on the lips as we stand on the sidewalk. I stand there for a moment, a bit dazed with how forward she has become. “H-Hanako…” I stutter in a daze as I l...
by ArazelEternal
Fri Feb 05, 2016 2:06 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4862
Views: 1412407

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

Hey Folks, im sorry if its a bad timing or just absolutely blows up the current topic.. I've posted here before, that was 1 1/2 years ago and I can truly say that the people on here are wonderful. Never have i felt so accepted before, thats why im confident enough to tell you a new story. A little ...
by ArazelEternal
Thu Jan 28, 2016 5:47 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: You have been playing too much KS when...
Replies: 2412
Views: 798476

Re: You have been playing too much KS when...

When you have a roleplaying plot that uses KS as its base.
by ArazelEternal
Sun Nov 08, 2015 7:17 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: KS lookalikes
Replies: 762
Views: 325818

Re: KS lookalikes

I have no doubt that these have been brought before, but I was watching Hidamari Sketch and noticed these two came up ^_^ https://i.gyazo.com/8c6c71c2b21c309f4a469802c3704945.png I can definitely see Sae as Shizune physically. However she doesnt have the matching competitive attitude. From Rakudai ...