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Chapter Five Part Two Kyouko nods to herself, and I’m hesitant to even wonder about what might be going through that head of hers now. In a single moment she’s established an ambition I hadn’t quite sensed in her before. “I’m guessing that case you had before was an instrument then?” I ask, a bit du...

The further down I go in editing this story, the more consistent I turn out to be using present tense, so this is a positive thing! Still a few errant slips here and there though, and I'm sure I've missed plenty. I'm actually a few chapters ahead of what's being posted here, with good reason conside...

Chapter Four Part Two Something about her tone tells me she’s not as sorry as she claims, or maybe just that she finds it too amusing. I can’t leave this peculiar behavior unaddressed any longer, though. “Why were you so tired..?” My head tilts as I face her more completely. “It was time for a nap,”...

Has it been a week or what? Well, at least for me it's been remarkably good, I hope everybody else is enjoying their time! This chapter gets no extra trivia. This is partly because I can't talk at length about Tchaikovsky very well, but mostly because the title kind of explains itself. :D Chapter 4:...

I can help devouring this, especially since it's clear we're only just getting started! This is an absolute joy to read. Plenty of notes to be taken about executing dramatic timing

Chapter Three Part Two Fortunately, my incompetence doesn’t have to be the center of my thoughts any longer as there’s a rapping of knuckles on Kyouko’s partially cracked room door. It’s nothing like my father’s unique tapping ritual, but I’m hardly surprised that it’s the flamboyant Doctor-of-Somet...

Maybe my trivia would be better at the beginning of a new chapter? Hmm, it probably doesn't matter. Chapter 3: Spring Rounds Part One This kind of situation is inevitable, isn’t it? People would want to or need to know what was wrong with me, right? Yet, the longer I linger on my preceding words, th...

B-but proclamation is such a nice word..! Well, you're absolutely right. I thought I managed to get as many of the previous past-tenses out, but clearly my editing eye needs work. As for the names, I might have been stretching beyond just the given name for the two of them. I honestly just came up w...

Chapter Two Part Two It’s a bit of a strange relief that the inside of the dorms are not near as pretty to look at as the exterior with its red bricks and surprising abundance of ivy. Instead, we’re greeted by clean, well-kept and strikingly modern walls. The wall color is something of a matte beige...

Edit implementation went much more smoothly than expected. Onward we journey, then. Chapter 2: Orpheo Part One “Sora Akiyama?” The girl seems to linger on my name, perhaps a bit longer than I’m comfortable with. The judgment is obvious, but the smile she derives moments later is innocent enough that...

You kind of nailed it hard on the head with the sentences. I like to think of it as just a part of my style, though sometimes I really do have to try and force myself writing smaller. Short sentences feel naked to me I suppose is the reasoning. It also helps that my thoughts flow in such long stream...

After checking the number of lines, I think I'm going to have to break up the remaining chapters into two posts each. Goodness gracious.

And thus we begin! In case it weren't obvious, this is taking place the same year as Hisao's arrival at Yamaku, but naturally he's still a short time away from arriving. The rest of the cast is in their spots, however, and things should be right in the world as a result. Chapter 1: Eurydice It’s an ...

Hello there! I don't know why I had never thought about doing this before I'd written more than 20,000 words, but I decided I might share a story I've started writing here, as well as premiere a few minor re-writes as I post chapters here. I figure being closer to the source forums would be a greate...