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The tenses, mang, the tenses.

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Well, I must thank Faulkner and his "As I Lay Dying" for teaching me all that jazz, it really is confusing.

Yo Megumeru, homie, you should write more fanfics in this vein, actually, I would definitely dig that.

First off I dont think Hanako is REAL. Also I want to apologize to mealforthree for saying you "ruined" Hanako. Im over it now. It was more of a rage post and i regret it now. Also thanks to zanger for understanding im not some 12 year old crying to a Hanako poster. Lastly, If I favorite ...

How the hell can a seemingly unrelated product ruin another product? Seriously, I can't grasp this. The remake of 'Sleuth' somewhat sucked but I don't extend my dissatisfaction to the original brilliant film. A movie ruining ancient myths? Huh. And now my clusterfuck of a story ruining a character?...

Now all you need to do to fuck with us big time is kill her off in the succeeding chapters.

Great stuff, d00d, loving the mild existentialist overtones, too.

Let's just say that the hundred years Hisao lived after his MoR stunt in Yamaku has some significance and is not just a number.

It read halfway and I was pissed. Another and I was just like "the fuck?" To me you have ruined Hanako. I just simply do not like rape. Then hanako was all for it? WHY!!! :evil: Deal with it. People are allowed opinions on things in the manner you posit is immature, e.g. the Keanu Reeves ...

>tim buckley discovers katawa shoujo Huh? How does Tim Buckley relate to KS? I mean, Tim and Jeff Buckley are awesome, but I don't get what you mean... >Tim Buckley >awesome Eh, you'd better not talk like that here, there might be a shitstorm a-brewing. In any way, words words words (as in B^U, rig...

Dayum, dis be good shizzle mah nizzle!

BTW:
Misha lie, panting and exhausted, next to Shizune.

Misha lay, <...>.

I enjoyed this thoroughly.

This, my dear friend, this is great.

Writing itself is kinda shitty and made the story not really feeltastic. The ending is Jimmy the Rustler, though.

Very, very nice indeed, Fluff.

A captivating read for sure.

If there was a Saki route in KS, I would never think of playing any other. More so after reading this.