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- Wed Jul 11, 2012 2:15 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Salvage [Hanako] Updated/Retooled 7/12
- Replies: 47
- Views: 16397
Re: Salvage [Hanako] Updated 7/10
Ahhh, another satisfying story. Keep it up mate. I can't stop read this
- Mon Jul 09, 2012 11:29 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Salvage [Hanako] Updated/Retooled 7/12
- Replies: 47
- Views: 16397
Re: Salvage [Hanako] Updated 7/9
Whoa, this post is little bit melodramatic, don't it ? complex conflict and situation. Please, make more story I curious what happened to both hisao and hanako
- Sun Jun 17, 2012 10:38 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Dead Space : Nakai (sample prologue)
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3240
Re: Dead Space : Nakai (sample prologue)
Thank you for all opinion. Sadly, now i focused myself to looking for a job nowadays. But, i promise i will posting the new concept of this topic soon. Thanks everyone. I never forget you guys opinion.
- Tue Jun 12, 2012 9:09 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Dead Space : Nakai (sample prologue)
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3240
Re: Dead Space : Nakai (sample prologue)
Good narrative, but I think you can benefit from a beta writer, as there are numerous points in the work that had quite awkward language in them. Also, I won't be surprised if Hisao dies of a heart attack in the end. :lol: Dead Space can be pretty..stressing. Nah, i keep working on fixing some mist...
- Tue Jun 12, 2012 12:07 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Dead Space : Nakai (sample prologue)
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3240
Dead Space : Nakai (sample prologue)
Hello everyone, now i gonna try make a project called "DEAD SPACE : NAKAI" (well, i am inspired by dead space franchise tee-hee) But, since this only sample of the prologue, i want you guy's opinion about this. If this good maybe i try make another part of this project. Here goes the prolo...
- Tue Jun 12, 2012 8:40 am
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: Katawa Shoujo Poetry
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3892
Re: Katawa Shoujo Poetry
That's good touching poem dude. Just post that on Fan Fic section like Kielox say..
- Sun Jun 10, 2012 10:37 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Music that makes you think of KS
- Replies: 809
- Views: 260931
Re: Music.
try this :
Both of them i think fitting for Lilly
Both of them i think fitting for Lilly
- Sun Jun 10, 2012 10:35 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Road of Adulthood (Post Hanako Good End)
- Replies: 103
- Views: 49388
Re: The Road of Adulthood (Post Hanako Good End)
If i see about the drinking scene on the last part, remind me to drinking scene at VN Snow Sakura. Hilarious
- Sat Jun 09, 2012 9:59 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: That Guy's Epilogue Emporium!
- Replies: 95
- Views: 47718
Re: That Guy's Epilogue Emporium!
i wish i can but curiousity can't be helped thengriffon8 wrote:On a long enough timeline, the odds of survival drop to zero. People are going to die eventually.
If it helps, ignore the epilogue. Pretend it ends with their wedding.
- Sat Jun 09, 2012 9:16 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: That Guy's Epilogue Emporium!
- Replies: 95
- Views: 47718
Re: That Guy's Epilogue Emporium!
Sigh, sad ending after all. Combining Isaac Clarke's dementia and Ezio Auditore's old days situation. Nice writing.
- Sat Jun 09, 2012 9:01 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Ballad of the Caterpillar
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3438
Re: Ballad of the Caterpillar
Hanako is the Caterpillar, yes. The Fox is Lilly. Also staring (In order of appearance), the Baku and the Kitten, The Hawk and the Pigeon, and the young man. I have everything planned out for how the story unfolds, if I was writing a story I'd probably be done with it be now, but rhyme and meter ar...
- Sat Jun 09, 2012 8:34 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Ballad of the Caterpillar
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3438
Re: Ballad of the Caterpillar
This ballad is about Hanako rite ? Beautiful words....
- Fri Jun 08, 2012 10:06 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: That Guy's Epilogue Emporium!
- Replies: 95
- Views: 47718
Re: That Guy's Epilogue Emporium!
Hope their joy of happiness is keep continued with happy ending Can't waiting moar !!
- Fri Jun 08, 2012 11:25 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: When introducing this game to somebody, how do you start
- Replies: 66
- Views: 21316
Re: When introducing this game to somebody, how do you start
Me : Man, get life with playing KS instead WoW. Try that (later i give link) Le friend : *sigh* okay okay i play it. It's just a simple VN right ? ** 1 day later ** Le friend : Man, did u believe that i stopped playing WoW because your game ? Me : WoW, i don't expect that. How's that happened ? Le f...
- Fri Jun 08, 2012 5:45 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: That Guy's Epilogue Emporium!
- Replies: 95
- Views: 47718
Re: That Guy's Epilogue Emporium!
Ahh, nice second part dude. Keep it up. Your writing is improving now (about emotional thing) Can't wait for another part !!