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What the others said. Still, I can ignore some of the problems given that you seem to have had a reason for the dog thing. And I agree with Ritsu, choices are important

Heavy... Also, good work

Today, in Tomorrow's Doom: Everyone has lots of sex!

Heh, to sneak out of dorms wihtou raising suspicion. To be eighteen again...

This is looking pretty solid so far, and I have nothing to add to what the others said. Keep up the good work! Also, And, well, sex. But I doubt anyone's looking for that on a school lunch break. Calling it now, Hisao and Ritsu end up having sex during lunch break further in the story, mark my words...

Going to keep an eye out for this, seems interesting

You know, I get the feeling either Ina or Midori are going to ask Hisao why he's at Yamaku and awkwardness will ensue.

Well, I really like this. End of the statement, back to lurking now

well, this is certainly... different, from what I'm used to see in fanfiction. I have to say, I quite like it

This is really good! I'm looking forward to see where you'll go with this

Well, took me a while, but finally done. You, good sir, are awesome in ways that defy description. Good job!

Well, I read the whole thing in one sitting. You, sir, just blew my goddamn mind. Good job

Well, shit. This... This is going to be depressing, isn't it?

This looks promising. I'll be sure to keep an eye on it.

IT'S ALIVE! ALIVE! MAWHAWHAWHAWHAW!!

Now on a serious note, I'm glad to see this getting picked up again. Like before, this chapter was really good. Looking forward to the future!

Very good job, hope you keep giving us these kind of sstories