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Well, I enjoyed reading that. Not sure if that's good or bad. I think I'll look into the original story at some point. Or that point and click adventure game, if it's any good. You can look on the internet, quite a few sites give you the story. It's a short story, takes 15 minutes to read. Just goo...

Good morning, hmm I mean good afternoon everyone. I decided not to go play Magic, but instead I overslept :P . I'll still give you a new part today. I'm noticing some similarities to another currently ongoing fic here on the forum... I like your story anyway. There were one or two typos again, but n...

You're new to this. Keep writing and you get better. Like the art teacher says, "You've got 50,000 bad art pieces in you; start getting them out." I am not new to writing, although I was never publiced as a professional writer. I am new to writing in english as a first language. If I had ...

Thank you Mirage for pointing out those mistakes. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Konda feels like he is jumping more than walking, and this outburst of energy is contagious. He doesn’t stop talking, always describing me our immediate surroundings, and I am grateful ...

One more thing: The bus ha s ve left some time s ago. Other than that a very good story. I'm not sure I like the bit about the narrator directly adressing the reader. For me 4th wall breaking always has the connotation of comedy. Also it feels a bit out of place because he only does it at one point...

Here is another part, as promised. ------------------------------------------- We are walking in what must be the direction of the school. I have to trust Konda for that. My cane makes a regular tapping on the ground. Konda isn’t saying a word; maybe he still feels sorry for walking off and leaving ...

I''m in the planning stages for my own fanfic, so helping others will help improve my own writing. I'll show changes in bold. That's everything I noticed, one thing to remember is that writing from a blind character's POV means that you have to make it clear how he perceives their reactions. For ex...

I'm throwing myself in. I'm going to write a fan fiction about Katawa Shoujo. First of all, I need to tell you that it's my first attempt at writing a story in english without writing it in french before. Aside from my english classes, of course. My native language is french, and even if I am biling...

Kanodin wrote:

MoonShadow wrote:Seems Clannad going to be the next on my list. Should I watch the anime or play the VN first?

Anime, and unless you can read kanji and the kana's, no sense in playing the VN, since it's not translated.

FUUUU!

The VN seemed nice. I hope it will be translated one day.

Seems Clannad going to be the next on my list. Should I watch the anime or play the VN first?

I don't feel any different from when I told you I hated you. And I still won't sleep tonight. I hope you understood that I don't really hate you ; I can't since I don't know you. It was all a figure of speech. I've just read the original story from Harlan Ellison, and I think your story is worse, in...

... until the finish line came into sight. "Never looked like that before," Hisao said. In previous dreams, he'd reach the line and wake up before he had the chance for a another lap. Now though, he didn't see anything beyond the line- if the concept of 'ending' ever manifested in reality...

Just a small passage of what I've been working on. It doesn't pertain to this story at all, but I may flesh it out once Cutter is finished. That is, if I ever get Cutter finished. The next chapter will be coming soon, I promise. I... hate you. There is no other word for what I feel. This piece of t...

http://www.noelshack.com/uploads/images/8806590662859_okaeri.jpg A test with Saya. She have some good sprite by the way. Sorry if it's a little necro, but I had to react. Sir, you just destroyed my mind. If I were to see Saya in KS, I would go to Kenji's room either to find a gun or to lock myself ...

I just remembered another couple of songs : Dis-Moi Pas Ça (Don't Tell Me That) by Oukoumé. That should be the exact thing Hisao should sing to Lilly to prevent her from going to Scotland forever... or to bring him with her. Europe, again by Oukoumé. That song is french too. That would be what Hisao...