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Rocket Royal,

I'm loving your writing style on this story. I honestly can't find anything to criticize the story on...mostly because it's totally from out of the left field. There's no similar story to compare this to on this forum. Looking forward to more chapters!

I just thought of "Stairway to Heaven" when Mutou was scrambling up the stairs. God, I feel old just thinking that. And the lyrics don't even match the situation at all!

I used to have an bit of OCD when I was younger. I would play the tile game quite often back in elementary because the school I was going to had alternating white and black tiles everywhere. It might be a game to her, but I remember it being somewhat calming to me...taking my mind off some things as...

Now that I reread this after all the editing you've done so far, I like the story even more. After readiing more of Hanako's inner thoughts leading up to the rooftop, it's almost plausible that she would be tempted to let herself fall for an instant. Some long paragraphs still need more splitting an...

I should probably consider myself somewhat lucky. I found out about KS just a couple months ago so it doesn't feel like a long wait for me compared to some of you. For me, final release is coming in months instead of years. :D I'm ready for the release after reading the forums and seeing the artwork...

Well, given the game starts in June, the only birthday you'd have to worry about is Hanako's. Also noting, her birthday seems like it could be a real sentimental event for her compared to the other girls. Her birthday seems like it would be more relevant to her storyline than the others girls birth...

It's good read. A bit clustered and I can't really imagine Hanako considering suicide so easily and so quick after misunderstanding Hisao's silence. Other than that, it's a nice and quick story to read. I've been thinking about writing a fanfic but I just joined and I wondered if it's too soon to do...

Quite a few groaners in here, but this is definitely one of the best threads on this board. This is the one that got me hooked onto this forums and I've been lurking around for the lulz. Figured I'd finally join and say hey.