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- Wed Aug 28, 2019 8:33 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Home (Complete)
- Replies: 19
- Views: 13650
Re: Home (Complete)
Chapter 8 I stared at myself in the bedroom’s mirror, and suddenly I sympathized more with Hanako’s reaction to first donning the surf suit. In the past when swimming, I had always worn baggy swimming trunks, not the skin-tight briefs that some men favored. But now, I was on full display. The suit ...
- Wed Aug 28, 2019 8:32 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Home (Complete)
- Replies: 19
- Views: 13650
Re: Home (Complete)
Chapter 7 Lilly returned the Monday a week before the new school year began, “So I’ll have time to recover from the jet-lag,” she said. I wasn’t able to meet her at the airport because of work, but Hanako did. I hadn't been fully aware of how much I'd missed Lilly until I got home from work to find...
- Wed Aug 28, 2019 8:32 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Home (Complete)
- Replies: 19
- Views: 13650
Re: Home (Complete)
Chapter 6 My mother packed us a couple of bentos to take with us on the train, even though the trip was barely two hours long. At least it would save us from having to buy lunch, which was nice. We hugged both of my parents good bye early in the morning before they headed off to work, and a while l...
- Wed Aug 28, 2019 8:31 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Home (Complete)
- Replies: 19
- Views: 13650
Re: Home (Complete)
Chapter 5 The flurry of final exams that came at the end of the school year were tough, but not as tough as previous semesters’ had been. I don’t know if that was because I just had easier classes this term (hah), or if I was getting used to the pace of university life. Lilly finished with exams fi...
- Wed Aug 28, 2019 8:31 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Home (Complete)
- Replies: 19
- Views: 13650
Re: Home (Complete)
Chapter 4 I was just coming out of class when I spotted a familiar blonde head sitting on a bench across the quad, despite the cold weather. I had a half hour until my appointment, so I crossed over to where Lilly was sitting. “Hi, Lilly,” I called as I approached, but I got no response. As I drew ...
- Wed Aug 28, 2019 8:30 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Home (Complete)
- Replies: 19
- Views: 13650
Re: Home (Complete)
Chapter 3 I was almost out the door on my way to class one Wednesday morning when my phone rang with Hanako’s ringtone. “Hi, Hanako, what’s up?” I answered. Phone in one hand, I tried to slip my backpack on. I had what felt like a hundred kilos of notes and books for today’s classes, and it was awk...
- Wed Aug 28, 2019 8:30 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Home (Complete)
- Replies: 19
- Views: 13650
Re: Home (Complete)
Chapter 2 One Friday, as I exited the elevator, I spied an armless redhead sitting in the doorway of our apartment, a large messenger bag on the floor by her side. “Rin?” I called out, puzzled. No response. I walked over to the door and saw that she was asleep, leaning against the doorframe. I crou...
- Wed Aug 28, 2019 8:29 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Home (Complete)
- Replies: 19
- Views: 13650
Re: Home (Complete)
Home Chapter 1 Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Chapter 5 Chapter 6 Chapter 7 Chapter 8 Chapter 9 Chapter 10 ________________________ Chapter 1 “My home is not a place, it is people.” —Lois McMaster Bujold, Barrayar University was wonderful. University sucked. I sighed as I wearily contemplated that d...
- Wed Aug 28, 2019 8:27 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Home (Complete)
- Replies: 19
- Views: 13650
Re: Home (Complete)
Thank you, all, for the lovely comments. I must confess, I too agree that Ogata's sub-plot was not well done—it was the weakest part of the story. I think he was a victim of my desire to get to the start of the poly relationship right away. Were I to rework this story, I'd start a few weeks earlier,...
- Wed Aug 28, 2019 8:16 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Feurox's Den of Sadness Updated 5th of January, 2024
- Replies: 107
- Views: 93173
Re: Time is Dancing (Notes)
I love the story & what you've done with it. Such a melancholic ending. I think this is the first KS story I've read that deals with a stroke & the changes that follow; it's a powerful thing. Not every story, every relationship, can end happily, and this felt like a very natural progression ...
- Fri Aug 23, 2019 11:14 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
- Replies: 585
- Views: 483615
Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 7/26/19)
Children.NuclearStudent wrote: ↑Fri Aug 23, 2019 3:20 am Sorry, wait, what in the goddamn is a "proof of sex token?"
- Wed Aug 14, 2019 4:12 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Feurox's Den of Sadness Updated 5th of January, 2024
- Replies: 107
- Views: 93173
Re: Ekephrasis and Other Stories [08/14/2019]
So I stop to take a break from my labors and see, Hey! A new story from Feroux! Hurrah! Good way to take a break.
...uh...
Sure, just rip my heart out and stomp on it a few more times, why don't you.
Brilliantly done, and a wonderful set of new characters. Thank you for this story.
...uh...
Sure, just rip my heart out and stomp on it a few more times, why don't you.
Brilliantly done, and a wonderful set of new characters. Thank you for this story.
- Tue Aug 13, 2019 11:06 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (2/24/21--Wet Dreams)
- Replies: 81
- Views: 98190
Re: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (Latest 7/8/19)
Ahh, Rin and Kenji. A classic pairing. Like a jellyfish in the desert, or a goldfish swimming in vodka. Just made for each other.
I'm not normally a big fan of Kenji, but this made me laugh. Well done.
I'm not normally a big fan of Kenji, but this made me laugh. Well done.
- Sun Aug 11, 2019 11:54 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Lap's One shots & misc - New Jan 3 2023 - "Dashing Through the Snow..."
- Replies: 44
- Views: 41229
Re: Lap's One shots & misc - New Entry 8-11-19
Akio and Akira The following post was written in response to Stiles Long's writing contest. Each participant was given a list of KS character pairings and a list of locations. One of each was chosen for this fic. There were a limited set of options available to participants in the contest and it ma...
- Wed Jul 31, 2019 8:36 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Avenues of Communication (Complete)
- Replies: 72
- Views: 51503
Re: Avenues of Communication (Completed 7-29-19)
“I’m holding Kimiko Shiina Hakamichi-Nakai,” The poor kid... I know, kids with hyphenated last names have it the worst. My kids have 15 letters to deal with, same as poor Kimiko. They spent half the time on standardized tests filling out the bubbles for their names... I’d been adjusting to the idea...