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Would be a fun premise for yandere Hanako, 'now a part of me will always be inside you, Hisao!'. But as it is, this didn't do it for me. Maybe try and flesh it out a bit more? (Pun not intended) Believe it or not, the original idea I had was Shizune inviting Hisao over for dinner after their break ...

it's a silly little thing I wrote in a couple of minutes

Hanako enters her room juggling the handle of the door and a baking tray full of cupcakes. She manages it without incident, save for a slight misstep as she uses her hip to close the door. After holding the tray with one hand and turning the lock with the other, she turns to the room. "Who want...

The Shimmie has a series of pics of Jigoro and the the female cast

Tee-hee

I read it again erasing all memories if the first draft I really like it, the fact that you change how often and long Hanako cheated on Hisao made her redeemable unlike the previous version I dont think you should remove the gifts Tenshi gave her, he's just seducing her Im glad you included the part...

Loving it so far

TheMaskedWriter wrote:Glad to hear, I was hoping you would write at your own pace with no pressure as to the amount of content you produce.

Looking forward to seeing what you come up with in your own time.

or maybe I'm setting you up for an even bigger troll end

*sigh* I've stumbled upon writer's block on my other fanfic and decides to give this noir thing another chance

Part 3

I, Kenji, open the door and was nearly blinded by the light. Something compelled me to go forward, however, and I obliged.

Something's wrong ... I'm Hisao? In mental asylum? What is this?

The End.

Painful History and Raindrops and Puddles

Part 2 A few days after meeting one Lilly Satou, I was beginning to understand why she hired me. All the legitimate channels for locating her friend were dead ends. This isn't a job for legitimate P.I.s, this is job for one which has connections to the seedy underbelly of this God forsaken town. Two...

That was very nice of you. I hope you see her again

Y.A. Confidential (Redux) Part I The name's Kenji, Kenji Setou, private investigation is my profession. At least that's what it says on my tax return. Truth is, in my line of work, you lie, cheat, and steal to dig up dirt. The dirtier the dirt, the bigger the pay. Add in the unhealthy habits that co...