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No need (or expectation) for rewrites - this is mostly my thoughts on areas where it was weak or could have been better, for you to chew on as well as for anyone reading. With regard to the difference of interpretations, I think I can best express my objection on the basis that your alternate interp...

First of all, completion of a work is always an accomplishment and always deserving of an accolade. Congratulations. I truly and sincerely mean it. While my previous comments may have been premature in conclusion, they remain viable for general sense as reading through the story progressively (which...

Honestly, what I find most interesting out of the highlighted entry is brythain's comments on the "rules" of Japanese letter writing. I'd like to second Feurox's comment with the add-on of the fic that his link links to: Courtesy of Doomish From there, it would actually be interesting to l...

Karaoke Night 25 Years Later... A Very Student Council Christmas Sharks and Minnows Katawa Shoujo: The Musical! So She Dances Hokkaido: a Turning Point Where Are They Now? Freaks and Friends Super Happy Funtime Christmas Special Tomorrow and Tomorrow and Tomorrow Two Halves Make a Hole The Death an...

I did a little bit of rereading. I have to say that I still don't get what this story is about, in the sense that I don't understand the purpose or what I ought to be receiving. :| Kinda going over my head. If you were unfamiliar with what a car is, and you saw this , you'd have no idea what it was...

Not certain what Japan's definition of legal blindness is (if any), but legal blindness in the US is statutorily defined as "a visual acuity (central vision) of 20/200 or worse in the best seeing eye or a visual field (peripheral vision) that is limited to only 20 degrees." Visual acuity o...

Well, after some exceedingly subtle prodding from Oddball, I may as well toss in my two cents. Between my initial post in the thread back when this was new and Crafty's post right above mine, there's not much else to say. It's a competently written short story that, frankly, has nothing more than a ...

Poor Misha is as lost as Hicchan! I wonder what steps they need to take to rekindle their flame ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) "Anal." On Discord earlier Prof was asking what the "mating press" position is :mrgreen: ... *Deep breath* Boy. I've been married for a decade, with four "proof of se...

It's early evening, and the sun is beginning to set. I'd rather not make a liar of myself, so I decide that the best thing to do is take a walk, like I said I would. The past couple days have left me with more questions than answers. On the one hand, there are little questions - like whether there w...

!!!WARNING!!! This is a joke chapter, for those who would rather not read about sexytimes A loud knocking sound wakes me from my sleep. Experience tells me that it’s Kenji or Misha. Or Shizune. Which, by logical extension means it will be Lilly this time. Or Rin, just because the universe likes to m...

A loud knocking sound wakes me from my sleep. Experience tells me that it’s Kenji or Misha. Or Shizune. Which, by logical extension means it will be Lilly this time. Or Rin, just because the universe likes to mess with my head. Much like with Kenji, the moment I turn the handle, the door is forced o...

The harsh buzzing of the alarm jerks me out of my fitful sleep. I’m doomed to be haunted by that damned puppet show my whole life, aren’t I? I vaguely wonder why I’m still setting the alarm. It’s not as if I haven’t been waking up this early on my own, and it’s more pleasant without the alarm, anywa...

Okay, got around to reading this, and where to begin? Actually, that's kind of easy. Fancopter, I'd recommend you disengage for a moment. Give yourself some time to either a) digest the feedback or 2) write future chapters. As it is, it's begging to look like the bits of Mendacium that made it notor...

Seen the Grisaja anime... Well, the first one anyway. If the story is even a little like the VN then you shouldn't expect too much. The Grisaia anime is a massive disservice to the VN. As for the VN itself, the best parts are the non-H scenes - to the point where I'd recommend the (censored) Steam ...

We, the Council The phrasing and flow of the story reminded me of a movie script, despite not being in script style. Alternately, you could say it almost feels like some bizarre sort of nature documentary. Content-wise, it's decent enough. Reasonably good characterisation, etc. I have to admit that...