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by Feurox
Wed Aug 14, 2019 2:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Feurox's Den of Sadness Updated 5th of January, 2024
Replies: 107
Views: 86488

Re: Ekephrasis and Other Stories [07/23/2019]

Thank you both so much for the kind words. And in the case of Crafty, thank you for that drawing, it really made my day.
by Feurox
Wed Aug 14, 2019 11:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Winter's Blossom (Updated 8/13/19)
Replies: 12
Views: 7785

Re: Winter's Blossom (Updated 8/13/19)

A wonderful update. Poor Chika, Hisao can be pretty cold sometimes - though I think that's just because your Hisao is a bit of a dolt. Adorable, but very much still an idiot. I really enjoy the characterisation of Ikuno, and I love how happy this story is. It's got some minor tensions, with Hisao's ...
by Feurox
Tue Aug 13, 2019 9:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 26th, 2020)
Replies: 217
Views: 127256

Re: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Oct 15th, 2018)

It's a crime that I haven't commented on this yet. A crime. Your Miki is potentially my favourite character in any story I've read on the Renai. That's a tough realisation to have had, given the quantity of versions of Miki alone. And yet, here we are, and I can say with confidence that it is the Mi...
by Feurox
Mon Aug 12, 2019 6:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Chris' Saki One Shots
Replies: 15
Views: 8579

Re: Fallen Leaves & Broken Clocks/A Conversation on the Roof

I love how oblivious and fun Saki is here. It's nice to have something light-hearted and hopeful once in a while.
by Feurox
Mon Aug 12, 2019 7:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#73—'Stripping')
Replies: 324
Views: 290203

Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#59—'Smoke Gets In Your Eyes')

That was interesting, and I'm not sure why I liked it if I'm honest. Let me reassure you that I did, but if I had to give a specific reason why I wouldn't know how to. I've always been in awe of your writing style. You're very precise, and matter of fact, but it doesn't have the impression that most...
by Feurox
Mon Aug 12, 2019 6:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Dec 31st, 2023: Happy With Yourself)
Replies: 150
Views: 141453

Re: Crafty's One-Shots (Aug 11th, 2019: The Longest Road)

I’m getting swamped with how good the entries are at the moment. It’s quite a shame you feel that you didn’t give this heart, because I found it deeply affective. Hisao’s musings are very relatable, (and I like that you didn’t specify who he’s with, or thinking about, unless I missed something), it ...
by Feurox
Mon Aug 12, 2019 6:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lap's One shots & misc - New Jan 3 2023 - "Dashing Through the Snow..."
Replies: 44
Views: 39856

Re: Lap's One shots & misc - New Entry 8-11-19

A brilliant entry Lap. I must say I’m a saddened to see the first attempt not make it, but this is a really interesting story. I think Mutou is pretty believable, and Akira is exactly the type of person who would pursue him to protect Lilly - though Mutou doesn’t seem to think it’s neccssary. I actu...
by Feurox
Mon Aug 12, 2019 5:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2020-3-9)
Replies: 137
Views: 60403

Re: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-08-12)

Simply wonderful Scroff, how you continue to churn out such brilliant posts will never cease to amaze me! Both characters feel deeply - uh - in character , and the whole story has an adorable and fluid style :D There’s not any conflict, so it really is just a quaint and humours little slice of life....
by Feurox
Sat Aug 10, 2019 7:03 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: The "Oddball is not very good at art" topic!
Replies: 104
Views: 207840

Re: The "Oddball is not very good at art" topic!

Brilliant Stuff Oddball as always.
by Feurox
Sat Aug 10, 2019 6:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Their Future - A Shizune Epilogue (Contains some NSFW) [DISCONTINUED]
Replies: 19
Views: 7854

Re: Their Future - A Shizune Epilogue (Contains some NSFW)

Nice to see some updates here. Though I have to agree with Mirage again though, look at this: “No, no, no! Hicchan, this simply won’t do! This kind of thing requires planning!” “What if we don’t want to get married, or have kids?” “Wahahaha~! Are you sure you know Shicchan? She may be a career woman...
by Feurox
Tue Aug 06, 2019 4:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Their Future - A Shizune Epilogue (Contains some NSFW) [DISCONTINUED]
Replies: 19
Views: 7854

Re: Their Future - A Shizune Epilogue (Contains some NSFW)

Thank you so much for your feedback. I know the fic isn't great at the moment, but I'll be looking into introducing the students, as well as getting a proofreader, so please stick with it, and I hope I can improve it using your very helpful feedback :) I'll stress again that for a start, this is gr...
by Feurox
Mon Aug 05, 2019 7:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Their Future - A Shizune Epilogue (Contains some NSFW) [DISCONTINUED]
Replies: 19
Views: 7854

Re: Their Future - A Shizune Epilogue (Contains some NSFW)

First, welcome to the Renai! If you've posted here before then I apologise, but if not, welcome! We're certainly glad to have you. I'm just going to go ahead and address a few things you said in your initial post, just to be clear. Hello all, my name is K1-B0kuma. This is my Shizune epilogue, titled...
by Feurox
Mon Aug 05, 2019 8:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Riposte (Rika Story) (Completed)
Replies: 48
Views: 25739

Re: Riposte (Rika Story) (Completed)

And Riposte has reached it's climatic conclusion. This story obviously became quite the topic of discussion, and whilst much hasn't changed in my thoughts since my initial post regarding the story, I'd like to first congratulate you on finishing the story! I'd also like to once again reassure you th...
by Feurox
Thu Aug 01, 2019 7:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Aro's Story Thread
Replies: 10
Views: 4029

Re: In Memory of: Lilly

Simply beautiful. Eloquently told, and wonderfully heartfelt - seriously, I’m in awe at how beautiful this story was Arodyrok. Phenomenal writing, and absolute proof that a story doesn’t have to be complex to be brilliant. Maybe this story just really resonates with me, I’m sure many of us have been...
by Feurox
Thu Aug 01, 2019 7:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gravity: A Molly Pseudo- Pseudo Route. Updated as of 11/03/2019
Replies: 115
Views: 89194

Redshift PT2

Redshift PT2 To everybody’s surprise, the film being shown was a fairly new adventure flick about two young gentlemen adventurers, who stumbled across an ancient city and released a curse. It ended up having one of those corny morals, about how the treasure was ‘the friends we made along the way’, ...