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by Mournful3ch0
Wed Feb 26, 2014 8:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 878735

Re: Yamaku Book Club

Making everyone read 'With Apologies to Harlan Ellison'... With the recent reappearance of Doomish... Nah, I'm kidding. It's well written, but don't go seeking enjoyment from it. You will gain nothing and lose a lot. Pro tip: DONT LOOK THAT UP. Do with it what you will. I never finished it, yet I d...
by Mournful3ch0
Sun Feb 23, 2014 9:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Time Bruises Memories
Replies: 7
Views: 5202

Re: Time Bruises Memories

Just gonna go ahead and post again, if that's alright. Maybe in some other world we already left and we're happy; maybe we're miserable. With that song playing in the background, that one sentence sets the tone for the whole story. I'm not certain about much, but I know we're not happy. So what if I...
by Mournful3ch0
Sun Feb 23, 2014 8:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Best Case Scenario
Replies: 10
Views: 5148

Re: Best Case Scenario

A character wouldn't think that way when describing themselves. And, around 204.2 centimeters ? That's way too precise to be using "around". How about "around 205 centimeters"? And, I didn't think katakana was a name. I could be mistaken, but... https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kat...
by Mournful3ch0
Sun Feb 23, 2014 7:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 878735

Re: Yamaku Book Club

dewelar wrote:Well, I haven't read this one yet, so I know what I'll be doing tomorrow...
Oh, it's a joy to read. One of my favorite crackfics.
by Mournful3ch0
Sun Feb 23, 2014 9:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: I want to make a Psuedo-Route
Replies: 35
Views: 13527

Re: I want to make a Psuedo-Route

Then expect the beginning to go up sometime this month...I hope. Please, as a beginning writer myself, I beseech thee: Write before you post. I wrote my introduction, then abandoned it for nearly a month. Came back, then wrote 3,000 words of some of my best writing in two days. Since then, it has t...
by Mournful3ch0
Sat Feb 22, 2014 10:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 854
Views: 479526

Re: Chapter 44 - Sojourn (part 4)

Maybe it's time for me to stop driving myself nuts and just wait until this story is finished to read the rest of it so that I stop making stupid posts like this :) . You and I both know that that will never happen. Sometimes I tell myself I can quit reading KS fanfiction whenever I want. I'm kiddi...
by Mournful3ch0
Sat Feb 22, 2014 8:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 854
Views: 479526

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 02/21/14 ~ C.44 - Sojourn

Mirage_GSM wrote:No, in the locked closet in Aiko's room ;-)
Yeah, Shizune always finds a way to tie him to chairs... :lol:
by Mournful3ch0
Sat Feb 22, 2014 8:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 878735

Re: Yamaku Book Club

Why limit yourself to just the 3-3 characters? I'm just a beginning writer, as you'll see if you choose to read the finished product. A visual representation will help me with creating a solid mental picture of a character and gives me a clue as to how I want them to act. You'll find some correlati...
by Mournful3ch0
Sat Feb 22, 2014 8:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 878735

Re: Yamaku Book Club

Oh, and Mournful, don't stop writing Misaki on my account. I rarely have time to work on my route between school and VN work, so feel free to take the spotlight as the main Misaki writer :D Oh, God. Gulp. Spotlight... http://i.minus.com/iG3RqoAKBOM6m.gif I'll see what I can do, but I don't like tho...
by Mournful3ch0
Sat Feb 22, 2014 7:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 854
Views: 479526

Re: Chapter 44 - Sojourn (part 4)

Stylistic choice? It's just different without the rest of your characters. Without the humor and easygoing banter between the main cast, you can't tell the same story. You're not lacking in writing quality or substance, but the problem to the reader is that the rest of your ensemble isn't present a...
by Mournful3ch0
Sat Feb 22, 2014 6:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 878735

Re: Yamaku Book Club

I just know a 'KS General' thread will be great. I'm not sure about the rest of the Renai's population, but I have some things to say. In this case, Misaki fanfiction. We are in uncharted waters here and I am now experiencing something that I never saw coming. When I learned that somebody else was w...
by Mournful3ch0
Sat Feb 22, 2014 10:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Time Bruises Memories
Replies: 7
Views: 5202

Re: Time Bruises Memories

Doomish! Very glad to see you here again, as I enjoyed most of your writing. That song set a perfect mood for the letter, so I thank you for including it. Made me feel exactly as described; a bit reminiscent and melancholy, but there is still hope and the world won't stop turning. A short addition, ...
by Mournful3ch0
Mon Feb 17, 2014 11:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kenji Who? Part 3 - Feb 20, 2014
Replies: 14
Views: 6585

Re: Kenji Who?

Meanwhile, I'm already late for my shift, so I check my bag, slip the sonic screwdriver inside, and walk away swiftly... Any other questions? Yes. Though this may seem a bit off topic, why does Yamaku's library run all day long, rather than start at lunch or after school? Should the students not be...
by Mournful3ch0
Sun Feb 16, 2014 11:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kenji Who? Part 3 - Feb 20, 2014
Replies: 14
Views: 6585

Re: Kenji Who?

Not being a Whovian myself, I spent the first two paragraphs wondering if it was an adaptation of Ground Hog Day with some sort of actual underlying plot, rather than just trying to get things right with a woman... XD

Well thanks it still read good. Monidooring thread please.
by Mournful3ch0
Fri Feb 14, 2014 6:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lustre: A Misaki Kawana Route [Update 11/05/2014]
Replies: 30
Views: 16486

Re: Lustre: A Misaki Kawana Route [Started 14/02/2014]

Yes! Yes! Yes! I always thought she looked cute interesting in the 3-3 dev photo! Same. Had no idea why nobody had written about her. That said.... Talk about being caught with your pants around your ankles. http://i5.minus.com/i8EROA0qEQHo1.png I'd really love to read this as it comes out, but I'd...