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As the proofreader for this, I am now honor-bound to commit seppuku atop an English language style guide. Sorry for not catching those, Panda.

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Good chapter. Couple things: It’s kind of perverse, in a way, that Haas and Wawrinka are practicing with each other. The ex-star and the perfect kid lacking that extra bit of talent. I wince and check myself. These guys are 11 and 13 in the world. They’re not doing so bad. But the way Ritsu puts it,...

Pork!? The best flavor of instant ramen!? LIES! Chicken is the best! CHICKEN I SAY!!! Otherwise, fantastic chapter. Relax. No one believes something as absurd as that. It's another example of the author emphasising just how stupid Hisao is. I didn't know they made any other flavors until I accident...

Another excellent one that somehow slipped under my radar. Or maybe I'm just going blind. Hey, thanks. (Oh gosh, expectations. Argh. [/internalweeping]) And while I'm at it, chapter two will be posted soon. I have to do something productive over my summer, after all. *knows that feel* I've been wai...

The OP hasn't logged back in since almost a year ago, so its probably safe to say this is dead fic Oh, sure, but you never know. Perhaps someday they'll wander their way back here and see that someone's still interested. There's so few works of quality about Rin as it is :( . I've noticed that, too...

Well if she just went straight for Hisao it would be too easy I guess? In all seriousness, Akira is a serious business women, not a high school student. And from everything we learn about her it's pretty clear that she wants to be taken seriously by her peers. So I just think that there is a part o...

Sooo...How about this story huh, guys?? I think I learned enough about the metric system and imperialism to say, "Can we talk about the Akira route now? Or give kudos to Thanatos?" Hear, hear. The one really f***ing things up here is Akira. One the one hand she tries to renew her relation...

neio wrote:Time-travelling fan art by Suriko:
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Would you believe that picture inspired this whole chapter? Down to how Rin was dressed and everything.

I let out a long sigh as I exit my room; the last in a long line of similarly exhaustive exhalations that don't seem to improve anything, but still seem to escape my mouth. Parts two and three of this sentence aren't independent, so you shouldn't use that semicolon and comma-but. Easy fix. Thanks f...

Hey everybody! Here's the first chapter of Act 3! Sorry about the pun title, I couldn't resist. :roll: Enjoy! Act 3: Tritone Scene 18: Out Standing in Her Field It's Sunday, and I'm at a loss for what to do. I idly check my phone to see if Kagami's responded to my text message yet, but she's probab...

Solistor wrote:Though, I'd like to make a note that after reading scene 12, I went and got that exact topping combo on my pizza the next day. Kagami doesn't lie.

I swear by this. Literally my favorite pizza.

Sounds like you need to read Tomorrow's Doom. It does everything you're asking for (and I believe may have even been partially inspired by this thread? Helbereth?) I will probably never elucidate on 3-1 in my fic precisely because I don't see any point to reinventing the wheel. Helbereth's done a g...

...I'm gonna go over there, now, /smokebomb. http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m0z86v7SAH1qi7deco1_500.gif On a more serious note, I too am OK with the pace of their relationship. It allows more time to be spent on important character development and less time needs to be devoted to will-they-won't...

New music up! I was going to add other instruments but I liked the piano only version so much I really couldn't bring myself to mess with it.

It's called "Young Rain".

Listen Here.