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Missing a parent's arm on the floor, I'd say.

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it and yeah, I can't lend my script the same weight, hehe. I see your point about the pastebin, and I definitely agree in regard to the first two acts, primarily because I'd already finished them. Act 3 and onwards are still being written however, and rather than making ...

Happy birthday girls.

Steinherz wrote:Hisao looks oddly upset....

"I swear! As big as my arm! So now I'm in this chair."

yeah, the first two acts are on the pastebin, and 1-1 is meant to be a deviation from KS's act 1 scene Exercise. First post links to the pastebin where you can read the scenes up to this point.

#SNAP "Shizune snaps her fingers so loud that Suzu jolts up, covering her ear." su "Ow! What the hell?!" "Shizune scowls at her, showing no sign of pity or remorse. A gentle reminder why the Student Council seems perpetually understaffed. She signs off a flurry of gestures t...

#track, morning "As I approach the track I hear the familiar sound of Emi's running blades." "I didn't have as much trouble waking up this morning, mostly because I didn't do much sleeping to begin with. Miki has been absent for the past two days and I'm starting to doubt if she'll be...

3-1: Truancy #dorm exterior, morning #door squeaks open and shut "This morning looks promising, as yesterday's cloudy skies have parted leaving a clear spring morning. Suppressing a yawn, I head for the track." "The outside world is still wet; yesterday's rain has tinted everything a ...

Thanks dude, it's been a long way since that first page. I feel like I could've improved lots more by now if I spent more time drilling and practiced more regularly, but even so I do like knowing that I've progressed

Campaigning.

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Steinherz wrote: You are welcome.

I tend to stalk the artists I like (sorry Req XD), so I usually have links to all their accounts that I know about

Yes, apologize for liking my failures.

Steinherz: I redlined it for you

it was commissioned on deviantart and I will be studying it further to improve my own stuff. Miki's nose looks off to me though.

I always love Lilly artwork, but I have a problem with ones like the one from the previous post where Lilly appears to be looking into the perspective we're seeing from. That uh... that wouldn't happen. So fanart of her shouldn't have her do something she can do in the VN? :lol: the vn has Lilly pe...