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- Fri Feb 10, 2012 6:25 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Weekend at Hisao's (Was: At the Train Station) - [Some Porn]
- Replies: 201
- Views: 168222
Re: Weekend at Hisao's (Was: At the Train Station) - [Some P
Thanks for the explanation on Japanese weddings.
- Fri Feb 10, 2012 6:00 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Lamb and The Fox
- Replies: 83
- Views: 87432
Act2 "Exploration" - Scene 1
I sometime wonder if I've got some masochist tendencies. At first, for a youngster bored on a Saturday night, going back to the Slaughterhouse seemed a good idea. Tokyo might offer all kinds of entertainment, but most of them are above my allowance. It's not for nothing that I accepted to share a fl...
- Fri Feb 10, 2012 12:34 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Weekend at Hisao's (Was: At the Train Station) - [Some Porn]
- Replies: 201
- Views: 168222
Re: Weekend at Hisao's (Was: At the Train Station) - [Some P
My feels for the last one and half part were quite... Meh... I guess that as a married man, I'm not that teary-eyed about all that wedding ceremony thing, or formal engagement thing. On the other hand, I found it well-written. I've especially appreciated the waiting-for-the-bus part, the atmosphere ...
- Fri Feb 10, 2012 11:09 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A view from the dark (Feedback appreciated!)
- Replies: 33
- Views: 11337
Re: A view from the dark (Feedback appreciated!)
I find it even more confusing than the first version.
What are the quotes about?
What are the quotes about?
- Thu Feb 09, 2012 5:31 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Lamb and The Fox
- Replies: 83
- Views: 87432
Re: The Lamb and The Fox
Thanks, and you can take your time.
I try to post new chapters weekly more or less, so you're not missing much by reading it at the rhythm that suits you.
I try to post new chapters weekly more or less, so you're not missing much by reading it at the rhythm that suits you.
- Wed Feb 08, 2012 5:30 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: KS Academic Conference Paper - Seeking Help
- Replies: 143
- Views: 76510
Re: KS Academic Conference Paper - Seeking Help
1. Which girl's thread affected you the most emotionally? Why did it do this? Rin. I think it's because I recognized a part of me in her, and admired the other part. The creative person is what I didn't dare to be when I was her age, keeping my imagination to myself, because I didn't want to turn ev...
- Tue Feb 07, 2012 6:02 pm
- Forum: Support
- Topic: Steam selling Katawa Shoujo
- Replies: 4
- Views: 4085
Re: Steam selling Katawa Shoujo
Just check the release date...
- Tue Feb 07, 2012 5:40 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
- Replies: 227
- Views: 144368
Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Arg. I wanted to find something to criticize, like I like to do, but when Lily called, I just had to read as fast as possible and completely forgot about that... Only thing I can say (after a second read), is that I like that Hanako blurted it out directly. Adding another miscommunication on top of ...
- Tue Feb 07, 2012 5:25 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Lover's Gasp, Lover's Grasp
- Replies: 38
- Views: 19267
Re: Lover's Gasp, Lover's Grasp
Nice first part, but then, the change of narrator is a bit jarring, given that your first posting was all Hisao, I thought we were going for a single first-person narration. Plus, is the flashback necessary? Hisao could have given us the update about Hanako, and completed it by discussing with her. ...
- Tue Feb 07, 2012 5:13 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Lilly's Route
- Replies: 518
- Views: 208990
Re: Lilly's Route
Seems I liked this path just for the thing you didn't: deconstructing the "purity sue" image, and discovering the private Lily letting her hair down and acting on her impulses (healthy adolescent sex drive FTW), and even planning for them (see her being already on the pill) was for me one ...
- Mon Feb 06, 2012 5:32 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Rin's Path discussion *spoilers*
- Replies: 729
- Views: 257143
Re: Rin's Path discussion *spoilers*
I don't think the point is that Hisao finally understands Rin. I think the point is he accepts she's thinking differently and loves her like that, misunderstandings included. (and honestly, it gives a brighter outlook for their future - a couple of Rin would have serious problems finding its place i...
- Sun Feb 05, 2012 5:57 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Is there a path on Hanako's that doesn't approach H-scene?
- Replies: 38
- Views: 15004
Re: Is there a path on Hanako's that doesn't approach H-scen
I just did Rin's path and the H-scene made me angry. But I don't want to turn off adult-content 'cause I feel it won't be the same. So after reading this thread i found that there will be more shocking H-scenes. UGH! Do all visual novels have H-scenes? I think they could have had complete story eve...
- Sun Feb 05, 2012 5:43 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Reactions and Reflections (Hisao/Hanako)
- Replies: 11
- Views: 6406
Re: Reactions and Reflections (Hisao/Hanako)
Good enough for making me want to comment, but I'd say unequal (not in terms of writing quality, more in terms of content for me, so it's purely subjective) Some were a bit too sugary for my tastes. But Lily's one felt nice. And Kenji's was really good. Especially in the first part monologue, I felt...
- Sun Feb 05, 2012 5:25 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
- Replies: 227
- Views: 144368
Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Same here: nice rewrite of a canon scene from another POV, I'd like to see where this goes.
- Sun Feb 05, 2012 5:24 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Bad Dreams (Hanako)
- Replies: 33
- Views: 22363
Re: Bad Dreams (Hanako)
I liked it, except for the final scene, where I couldn't think for the smallest moment that Hisao was going to dump her, so I thought it was a bit long before Hanako realizes, I hate trying to follow a dumb narrator (not that Hanako's that dumb, but she was clearly wearing the dumb act during that m...