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- Thu Aug 19, 2021 9:04 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 935686
Re: Yamaku Book Club (An Apology to the Nurse)
https://i.imgur.com/8FRtIUN.png Well, here's an interesting one. It's a nice short work that, in the same thread, got more fanfic written as a response to it in the same topic. It's a very short piece with a very Kenji-like Hisao and it hilariously explores exactly what happens if Hisao DOESN'T die...
- Thu Jul 29, 2021 9:20 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: fool's game (A Saki x Hisao fic)
- Replies: 3
- Views: 3675
Re: fool's game (A Saki x Hisao fic)
Your intro sets a bad first impression (seriously, go back and use some capital letters) and the dream scene probabaly could have been cut completely with no real loss, but once the story gets going, it's not that shabby. Saki comes off as a rather fun character.
- Sun Jul 18, 2021 10:14 am
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: Blooper Reel
- Replies: 1333
- Views: 729647
- Fri Jul 16, 2021 8:46 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 935686
Re: Yamaku Book Club (Kotani's Agency for finding things)
https://i.imgur.com/8FRtIUN.png Kotani's Agency for finding things by Ario. There sure are a lot of detective stories set in KS. Unlike certain other fics though, this one doesn't do anything to break canon or even the mood set by the main game (unless you count Kenji's set-up here but you could ar...
- Wed Jul 14, 2021 11:33 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Anholonomy - Alt Act One of a ??? Pseudo-Route
- Replies: 9
- Views: 6968
Re: Anholonomy - Alt Act One of a ??? Pseudo-Route
It's an interesting idea having the first choice be set in the hospital. That's not anything I would have expected. A lot of the hospital stuff could have been cut through, as your basically just retelling us what we already know. I did like the details about the exercise though. That was a nice tou...
- Tue Jul 13, 2021 12:45 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: 10 Years anniversary and what would you like to see?
- Replies: 19
- Views: 28363
Re: 10 Years anniversary and what would you like to see?
So I love this game, played it in middle school in 2012, and I come back to often so I'm not new to the game (is it really a game or is it a way of life?). Anyways, I just realized it débuted in 2012. This whole time I totally thought it came out in like 2007. Wow. It's really cool to know that I g...
- Mon Jul 12, 2021 11:10 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Dance Of The Delicate
- Replies: 27
- Views: 24178
Re: Hanako Route, Part 4: Slaying Dragons
While the set up for this story was flawed, the idea of a school dance was cute. The script format did you no favors though, and actually seemed to get worse as you went along. Rather than having characters engaged in conversation, it felt like they were taking turns talking. One character has their...
- Wed Jun 30, 2021 1:51 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: (28/07/21 Ch. 9) Family: To Lose and To Accept (Iwanako/Shizune GE) (OCs)
- Replies: 16
- Views: 12054
Re: (27/06/21 Ch. 3) Family: To Lose and To Accept (Iwanako/Shizune GE) (OCs)
I honestly hadn't even notice the date change. As for the story, it's certainly not the direction I would have seen most of the characters going, not to say it's bad though. There are a lot of people that write Iwanako as messed up by what happens, but I think you've took it further than anything I'...
- Wed Jun 30, 2021 12:50 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: Blooper Reel
- Replies: 1333
- Views: 729647
- Tue Jun 29, 2021 12:04 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 935686
Re: Yamaku Book Club (20210628 Hisao & Akira Avoid The Family)
Wow, it's been more than six years since we last put this in YBC. Way too long! It's well-engineered and carries a lot of well-crafted punch. No spoilers, of course. Everyone should be allowed to read it through a few times until they get all the feels. I know. This one is hard to talk about. You w...
- Mon Jun 28, 2021 5:50 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: [Ria's Oneshot Hell] 12/24/18
- Replies: 24
- Views: 22689
Re: [Ria's Oneshot Hell] 12/24/18
A Different Kind of Tension An unfamiliar character in the place of Hisao during Rin's "Proof of Existence" as something of an epilogue, written for SapphicYumi. I'm not sure how accurate a take this was on Rin, but it was a funa nd enjoyable one. As for being an unfamiliar character, I a...
- Sat Jun 26, 2021 3:44 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 935686
Re: Yamaku Book Club (Reunion: Hisao and Akira Avoid The Family)
https://i.imgur.com/8FRtIUN.png I had some issues in my liufe to handle since my last update. I apologize for it taking so long. With that said, this time around, I thought we could look at another old classic. This one has been looked at by the bookclub once before, but that was quite some time ba...
- Sat Jun 19, 2021 3:17 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: PB and Bananas (Post Rin Good Ending)
- Replies: 4
- Views: 3752
Re: PB and Bananas (Post Rin Good Ending)
It's a very nice work with Rin. I think the idea of it being slightly confusing and not clear actually helps given the character involved.
- Sun Jun 13, 2021 2:59 pm
- Forum: Support
- Topic: Some advice for my first playtrough?
- Replies: 2
- Views: 9286
Re: Some advice for my first playtrough?
Play through it completely without a walkthrough.
Don't check for a walkthrough or even to see what scenes you're missing until you think you've got all the endings.
Then go back and see what you've missed.
Don't check for a walkthrough or even to see what scenes you're missing until you think you've got all the endings.
Then go back and see what you've missed.
- Sun Jun 13, 2021 2:58 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Evil Iwanako, a short one-shot
- Replies: 10
- Views: 12258
Re: Evil Iwanako, a short one-shot
It's not horrible written for what it is, but as a part of KS it feels oddly pointless.