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Well, this certainly is taking an odd direction all of a sudden. Glad to see you continued the "Saki beating up on other characters" thing she had going in mocaw's version because while it makes her look like a total bitch, it is kind of funny. I will, however, say that I still don't under...

In any case, your use of the language is otherwise versatile and original and makes for a good read. I'm guessing you're not natively English, but that doesn't show often. if anything, it shows the effort and care that went into it. Scissorlips is as American as apple pie. And apple pie is pretty d...

Sucks that Hanako doesn't plan on leaving then, doesn't it!

Caught that for you. At least one every chapter, I swear. I don't think I'll ever have a chapter of any story where I get everything right. Alas. With the next line being Hanako suddenly on her floor again, I feel like this is a bit disjointed. Perhaps the earlier disappearance up the stairs should...

Forget it.

He did say "almost concluded". I don't think that means the story is over. (Also I know I've posted here before but I haven't commented on the story outside of the one-shot it used to be months and months ago but I can't say how I feel about it without gushing to an extreme amount so I've ...

I love and hate reading this story at the same time. I love it because you're an excellent writer and the story is very well thought-out and entertaining, and you've expanded the idea of an Akira route into a full padded-out story by having it explicitly not be an Akira route until just recently wit...

I hate to beat a twice-dead horse, but people keep asking me when I'm going to continue this, so I have this to say: Unfortunately, I'm not. I've completely lost my drive to write a route after my departure from Salty Tears and though I do have a lot more TIME to write, I don't have the motivation n...

Oh come on, that's a minor insult for writing a story where Hanako gets made into a sex slave/forced prostitute, presumably for shock value. Contrary to popular belief, I don't write my stories just for the shock value of them. I write the majority of my stories because I like writing the polar opp...

JTemby wrote:If you are implying this doesn't feel like KS, then please be reminded that this is a heavily OC piece written by an absolute madman.

Gee, thanks.

Forget it.

Forget it.

nemz wrote:Either that or... nah, that's crazy.

Oho? Do you have a theory? Please, share it with the class. :3c

And, finally, a picky detail-oriented question: How can someone look down a fully-buttoned-and-ribboned Yamaku blouse? It seems to hug to the neck/sternum rather closely. I've only just now remembered that it's pretty much impossible to look down the Yamaku uniform because of the bow, so I changed ...

Forget it.