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This must be what drives people to drink.

I like that Misha suddenly gets calm and collected enough to have a deep and involved conversation with Hisao after he just raped her and murdered Shizune.

EDIT: And I like that Misha just for some reason happened to have Hisao's parents' number.

You bumped a thread that has not been updated since October and has not been posted in since November to ask that?

Really, dude?

I still maintain that I don't think route-based choices work in a narrative text style. As the writer, you have to explore one path entirely before immediately going back to an earlier point in the story to say 'no, that didn't happen, instead this happened'. It's jarring to have the story come to a...

Alright, I think I feel the need to voice a complaint that seemingly only I have, and that is STOP HAVING YOUR OC STORIES START WITH THE CHARACTER BEING SENT TO YAMAKU FOR THE FIRST TIME FROM X LOCATION, PLEASE, FOR THE LOVE OF GOD I have only seen a small handful of OC fics that don't start off wit...

Yessssssssssssssssss this is the best. What an ending. I was proud to be your alpha reader and designated doodler. Godspeed, Scissorlips. Godspeed. ;__;7

One last doodle for the road.

http://puu.sh/284Am

Technically, Scissorlips does present it in chunks. He posts anywhere between 10-15,000 words at a time, but they aren't always contained in one chapter. Sometimes he splits it up into multiple chapters over concurrent posts just to break it up a little bit, I've noticed.

Hey, c'mon man, no need to be bitter. It's your story, you write what you want. There's no limiting factor for believeability in these forums. This is fan-fiction, not famous-author-penning-next-literary-masterpiece. Brogurt got savaged for Mendacium, but he still wrote it. You wanna write somethin...

Maybe I should have just had Hanako get raped in chapter three like I'd originally written on pastebin then! Oops! None of this would be a problem if I hadn't decided to make the story a little longer like I did when I was penning down chapter four.

Hmmm. Doomish, while there's no particular problem with some characters doing dumb things sometimes, or even with some characters doing dumb things all the time, there's a problem when all the characters are doing dumb things all the time, unless you're writing slapstick comedy. Horror movie: extra...

Well the premise of this story seems to be what could happen if all characters made the most stupid decisions possible. I don't think you quite understand that if everyone made the right decision all the time, there would be no story. I keep seeing "so and so should have done this" and &q...

Forget it.

It's like they say: Patience is a virtue.

"Is this still being worked on"

Nah Scissorlips just decided he was sick of it and gave up a few chapters from the finish line and 50,000-some-odd views in. Just, y'know, because. (It hasn't even been a month, dude.)

The logic you're seeing in the story is as human as I can make it. Hanako's rationalization for waiting for Takai is flimsy, yes, but it's because she honestly believes she'd be safer with him than on her own. The reason she trusts him is because now she knows his ulterior motive for selling her, an...