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by Razoredge
Thu Nov 19, 2020 4:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Chiasmus Through the Night – A Late, Late, S9 for Craftyatom.
Replies: 15
Views: 9337

Re: A Chiasmus Through the Night – A Late, Late, S9 for Craftyatom.

That's a wonderful thing we have right here. And I have to say, thank you, for writting something like that, and share it with us. I really like this piece, because of your writing style (which is lovely), and because I kinda like to see something about present-days Hisao, which is pretty rare, sadl...
by Razoredge
Wed Nov 11, 2020 8:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
Replies: 1198
Views: 988186

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 11/10)

As I just told you, this is a wonderful update. You got me on some points, and the part with Chisato struck me. You nailed this part, I have to say. Also, it brings some new stuff about Hisao's personality, and I really like it, especially how he tries to handle it without taking sides, as Blackmamb...
by Razoredge
Sun Nov 01, 2020 11:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Pain (OC Story)
Replies: 21
Views: 26656

Re: Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Pain (OC Story)

I have to say, I'm in full agreement with Chatty. This is wonderful. Brister, you have one of the best writing style out there. As usual, I don't write too much when I'm commenting a story, because I don't really know what to say, in fact. But, here, we have a wonderful start. We jump immediately in...
by Razoredge
Tue Oct 13, 2020 7:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)
Replies: 95
Views: 45258

Re: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)

I have to say, that's some really high quality stuff. One of my favorites readings currently. It does has flaws, like everything, but besides that fact, it's a very enjoyable story. I'm really amaze about how you achieve to keep a high quality writing with such a quick pace. This is my first ime com...
by Razoredge
Tue Oct 06, 2020 2:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-13 added 27-02-2022
Replies: 58
Views: 47919

Re: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-11 added 10-06-2020

Lotus https://i61.servimg.com/u/f61/17/47/20/86/bweh10.png First at all, I will thank Req for this piece of art. I really like it, and I hope you too. You should subscribe to his patreon, Req deserves it. Since my little stroll with Lilly and Saki last week, I have spent a lot of time with Lilly an...
by Razoredge
Sat Oct 03, 2020 12:45 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Some Emergancy commission goodness
Replies: 4
Views: 4646

Re: Some Emergancy commission goodness

I really like the style of the last piece.
by Razoredge
Tue Sep 29, 2020 9:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (9/15/21 Update)
Replies: 35
Views: 21772

Re: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (9/29/20 Update)

It was quite a fine read, I have to admit, I really like your writing style. Your idea was good, really, even if I personaly don't see Shizune doing something like that. I would see her with responsabilities, in fact, because of her job in the Student council. But it was up to you, and you did a rea...
by Razoredge
Tue May 26, 2020 4:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
Replies: 1198
Views: 988186

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated/New Art 5/26)

That was another great chapter, Euro, as always. I'm stunned by your ability to maintain a great writing in every chapter, that's awesome.

I'm agree with Calcifer, it was a trope, but it fits great with the story.

Once again, that was a very pleasant reading, as always.
by Razoredge
Wed May 06, 2020 8:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
Replies: 1198
Views: 988186

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New Art 5/4)

That's a very cute art, to be honest. I love it.
by Razoredge
Tue Apr 21, 2020 10:28 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Anyone know when Lilly found out?
Replies: 17
Views: 12078

Re: Anyone know when Lilly found out?

Mirage_GSM wrote: Tue Apr 21, 2020 8:34 am AfaIct there is only one line referring to that topic in the LN
What do you mean by LN?

And I'm pretty sure she didn't leave Japan, for me it's a non-sense to leave a country and come back right after.
by Razoredge
Wed Apr 15, 2020 6:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
Replies: 1198
Views: 988186

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 4/15)

Once again, it was a really pleasant reading. I don't know how you achieve to do it, but mixing sad feelings with happy feelings like that, it's amazing. There's sadness in this story, but also hope, and I try to hold on to that hope. I hope too, as HF, that they will find peace and solace together....
by Razoredge
Wed Mar 11, 2020 6:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-13 added 27-02-2022
Replies: 58
Views: 47919

Re: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-10 added 03-11-2020

Green meadows In this school, there are two ways to start a school day – with or without an exam – and we have a history test this morning. I’m self-confident because I know a lot of things in this subject, and I work hard enough to get good grades. The class fills up slowly with a lot of anxious s...
by Razoredge
Mon Mar 02, 2020 6:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Sands of Time
Replies: 15
Views: 6330

Re: The Sands of Time

Oddball, your writing is excellent, I have to say. It's always enjoyable to read your writing. Sometimes, I need some time to be able to understand one or two sentences, but overall, it's great. Besides, I really like the fact that you took the titles of the songs of the OST to name every chapter, i...
by Razoredge
Mon Feb 10, 2020 9:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (2/24/21--Wet Dreams)
Replies: 81
Views: 91931

Re: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (2/3/20--Contest Fic "The Last Stand")

WTF did I just read... As a smut thing, it was really good, I have to say. Some shock value there, but a pretty good one. That being said, I wasn't accustomed to this kind of Lilly, to be honest, but I really like the idea. Really good work for this piece, I really liked read this one. Your pairings...
by Razoredge
Tue Feb 04, 2020 6:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-13 added 27-02-2022
Replies: 58
Views: 47919

Re: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-9 added 01-22-2020

Yeah, that was what I wanted to say, but as you can see, I still have some grammar and vocabulary issues. But that's why I'm writing, because I want to improve myself ^^ Yeah, I'll defenitively send you some edit requests