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As I do, I wonder why[/i[ she still has her phone. You messed up your formatting on the end tag ;) As for the chapter itself, it's interesting to see this interaction play out from Hanako's perspective. Not much more to say than that. I wonder where Lilly is. Probably drinking on the roof with Kenj...

I should really crosspost MTB to Archive of Our Own and compare the reactions. My reviews on FFN are pretty uninspiring.

Wow. I think I'm now dumber for having read some of those comments. Yikes.

Hmm. Mendācium. Been a while. Can't say that I remember it too fondly, nor did it make a stronger impression this time around. The writing itself is decent enough, and the story is paced well. It's also short enough for as one-note of a premise as it's got. That's about the only good thing about the...

Only one way to tell. I must press him all the way. Are there any holes in my concept of feminist domination? A true friend would tell me if there were. I could tell him a version with real holes in it and see if he points them out to me. If he did, he would be a friend. And lastly, a good friend w...

Mirage_GSM wrote:

forgetmenot wrote:I dunno. I seem to be the only person on these forums to express a modicum of hesitance, so take that for what it's worth.

Well, I guess, I always "express a modicum of hesitance" so it's probably natural not to count me

Wait, hesitance isn't your middle name?

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climatic/delta/suriko/aura

Somehow, aura as Boomhauer makes total sense. I imagine this is how some conversations early on in development probably went.

I think I'm just going to refrain from stating any strong opinion until the dust has settled. Every chapter pulls me in a different direction, and while there's certainly a build-up of tension going, I feel... lost, I guess? I think this chapter might have been the proverbial 'tipping point' I was t...

Strange. Spooky! There’s music coming from one of the practice rooms, a sad violin or a cello maybe. One of those things you can pretend to carry but it’s really a Tommy Gun. American gangsters in Yamaku? I can see the headlines. On the Net everybody thinks random American students hang out at Japa...

Your formatting leaves a lot to be desired. You need to read a style guide (like Strunk & White's The Elements of Style. ) You've been way, way too parsimonious with your line breaks and your paragraphs are a mess. I can't read your story (like, literally , I cannot read it ) until that is rect...

Honestly, KS did a lot for me outside of the realm of 'feels'. I played the game and it did affect me emotionally, but honestly I think the coolest stuff has happened because of these forums. I can say I'm a much better writer now than when I started on my fanfic. I also had never tried my hand at d...

Are people really that concerned about stolen bicycles? I was under the impression that nobody would worry about that in Japan. Maybe since there isn't as much of a focus on roads in Japan, the biking scene stays local. That way, it'd depend on the area. Not that I'd assume bike theft was a problem...

She shakes her head as she hands me the cane. “It's only a few steps. I'll be fine.” I nod and accept it from her. It's a big heavier than I thought it would be, and very sturdy. “I guess I'll see you after, then?” I ask. Should be a "bit" heavier. That's the only typo I saw, although I w...

At the risk of seven years bad luck for commenting on unfinished work...this is pretty obviously unfinished work. Given that, I can't really give a fair critique of either one. However, I will say that I'm glad neither of these made it into the finished product. While the proto-Rin story could have...

http://shimmie.katawa-shoujo.com/image/3707.png That's also an unofficial image, though… Based off an official image. http://a136.idata.over-blog.com/549x413/3/35/40/00/Images-7/KS04.jpg Ah, yes, the infamous "Emi-on-ground" image. This was actually the pic that got me to play Katawa Shou...

I left that until the end and left out most of the details for a few reasons. Storywise, if I were to write it out, it's not something the Hisao or the reader would ever find out a lot about. "This happened. You don't get the details." I knew whatever I did write there, regardless of the ...