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by forgetmenot
Sat Mar 02, 2013 4:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 201778

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route (OCxHisao) [Updated 3/1]

Which leads me to my next hurdle: how to find her.
Asking Emi where they have classes would be a good start.
Shut it, you, with your logic.

Official story is that Hisao is too wrapped up in his own head to think of asking Emi. Much like me.
by forgetmenot
Fri Mar 01, 2013 9:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 201778

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route (OCxHisao) [Updated 3/1]

Scene 9: Lost in Thought "Hisao, I have something to show you," Kagami says, teeth bared. She floats to my left, pulling the skin from her arm to reveal the mechanical inner workings of her body. For some reason, this doesn't surprise me. "Kagami, why didn't you just tell me?" I...
by forgetmenot
Thu Feb 28, 2013 11:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 201778

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route (OCxHisao) [Updated 2/28]

Scene 8: Intermezzo Today's been a slow day. Without Shizune and Misha in class, the day's been completely uneventful. They're probably taking care of student council business. I hope Misha's feeling better today- yesterday evening she seemed really depressed. She's probably fine. Misha seems like ...
by forgetmenot
Wed Feb 27, 2013 6:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 916
Views: 719685

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)

Awesome ending.

I'm not crying... I've just been cutting onions.
I'm making a Lasagna.

In all seriousness, finishing a work this big is a huge accomplishment. Congrats. And thanks for being part (read: most) of the inspiration for me to start writing in earnest. Much love.
by forgetmenot
Tue Feb 26, 2013 7:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 4/3)
Replies: 67
Views: 42574

Re: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 2/26)

Awesome chapter. I really like how the story is coming full circle. I really wasn't sure how Saki would be "redeemed" to the readers and this begins the process quite nicely. I couldn't agree more. I'm definitely liking the positive momentum this chapter adds to the story. Before now, I co...
by forgetmenot
Tue Feb 26, 2013 5:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 201778

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route (OCxHisao) [Updated 2/26]

Glad to see people are (mostly) enjoying it! Mirage's post first: The usual misconception. Graduation is at the end of march in Japan. Maybe have him change schools instead? Whoops. Sorry about that. Guess I should have done my research a little more carefully. There aren't any 500-yen notes in Japa...
by forgetmenot
Tue Feb 26, 2013 2:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 201778

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route (OCxHisao) [Updated 2/25]

Act 2: Structure Scene 7: Exceptions I don't think I've ever felt so horrible in my entire life. Well, that's not entirely true. But the other times I've felt this bad were when I was in the hospital and I could blame the doctors or my heart. Now, though, I only owe the incessant throbbing in my he...
by forgetmenot
Mon Feb 25, 2013 8:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 201778

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route (OCxHisao) [Updated 2/25]

My only complaint is the disability itself; Yamaku doesn't accept mentally unsound students, and it seems like anterograde amnesia is a wholly mental ailment, not a physical one... Ah, glad you noticed! That's actually a planned story point, and the cause of some friction concerning the student cou...
by forgetmenot
Mon Feb 25, 2013 7:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 201778

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route (OCxHisao)

Scene 6: Photographs and Fireworks Knock knock knock. Huh? What time is... oh, crap. I've slept longer than I should have. Knock knock knock. And there's someone at the door. Fantastic. It's probably Kenji, warning me about the dangers of associating with too many girls in my free time. I guess I s...
by forgetmenot
Mon Feb 25, 2013 7:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 201778

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route (OCxHisao)

Scene 5: Second Day is the Hardest The alarm blaring in my ear reminds me of two things: one, that it's Sunday and I shouldn't be waking up this early. Two, I'm not any more energetic than I was yesterday afternoon after my walk. Somehow, I find myself pulling on track clothes and heading down the ...
by forgetmenot
Mon Feb 25, 2013 7:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 201778

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route (OCxHisao)

Scene 4: Recognition I step outside for the first time for a few hours and am met with a warm breeze across my face. It's definitely turned into a nice afternoon. I needed to get out of that building anyway. For some reason, I find myself less and less drawn to the library over the past week. I'm n...
by forgetmenot
Mon Feb 25, 2013 7:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 201778

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route (OCxHisao)

Scene 3: Alternative Medicine Fifteen minutes later, I'm dressed and waiting by the front gate for Kagami to arrive. It's warm out - I probably shouldn't have walked as fast as I should have to the gate, especially after what happened this morning. I'm starting to sweat a little. I don't feel espec...
by forgetmenot
Mon Feb 25, 2013 7:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 201778

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route (OCxHisao)

Scene 2: Exercise Nngh... I awaken in an unfamiliar bed. Where the hell am- oh, right, Nurse's office. What time is it? I pull back the curtain. No sign of Nurse anywhere. I sigh and lean back into the pillow. I suppose leaving without first getting cleared by Nurse would be out of the question. I ...
by forgetmenot
Mon Feb 25, 2013 7:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 201778

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route (OCxHisao)

Act 1: Life Expectancy Scene 1: A Little Night Music Whew. Yuuko was right; maybe I did grab too large a stack of books. I wheeze as I carefully place the pile of tomes on the floor. Nurse's suggestions - er, more like imperatives - of beginning an exercise regimen don't seem like such a bad idea a...
by forgetmenot
Mon Feb 25, 2013 7:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 201778

Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]

Hey, guys, my name's forgetful and I write stuff. This is my first large work of fiction, and I couldn't think of a better community to share it with. Without further adieu, I present a pseudo-route for Kagami Takahashi, an original character. Hope you enjoy! Note: This story is 18+ at times. Be for...