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- Fri Apr 30, 2010 3:20 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Broken Dolls (OCs) Prequelitis, Page 6
- Replies: 88
- Views: 40242
Re: Broken Dolls (Original Characters) Extra 2 (Pg3)
All together, now: Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.
- Thu Apr 29, 2010 11:25 am
- Forum: Fan Art
- Topic: This is My Fan Art
- Replies: 28
- Views: 11379
Re: This is My Fan Art
That pose puts this song in my mind.
Re: giant Emi
I can't see them either.
- Mon Apr 26, 2010 12:03 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Broken Dolls (OCs) Prequelitis, Page 6
- Replies: 88
- Views: 40242
Re: Broken Dolls (Original Characters) Main story END (Pg2)
http://i40.tinypic.com/24cccx2.gif Good show, Baconman. Damn good show. You did a fine job of developing your character, and she and her little world were a delight to read about. Loved the ending. :) I don't think anyone here would object to seeing more of your stuff. Perhaps you could find some k...
- Mon Apr 26, 2010 11:43 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A day in the life of ____________
- Replies: 65
- Views: 34620
Re: A day in the life of ____________
[puts on editor's hat] You should really lay off the parenthetical statements. They make the story look sloppy. If you want to convey something, describe it in the narrative. For example: "Blah blah bloobity blah," mumbled Jimmy. Or: "Blingy blangy bleen bloon," said Sally, mumbl...
- Sun Apr 25, 2010 5:40 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Extremist and Kosher's Lilly/Shizune goodness
- Replies: 40
- Views: 21648
Re: Extremist and Kosher's Lilly/Shizune goodness
Okay, trying my best to be mature about this. That was a very well-written sex scene. A very unusual one, to be sure, considering the nature of the participants, but I'd say you captured it very well. There's a real sense of sensuality conveyed here, not just mindless smut, and likewise, it reads li...
- Fri Apr 23, 2010 7:57 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Broken Dolls (OCs) Prequelitis, Page 6
- Replies: 88
- Views: 40242
Re: Broken Dolls (Original Characters) Parts 6&7(Page 2)
Catapults make everything better. This is a scientific fact!
- Thu Apr 22, 2010 12:31 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Broken Dolls (OCs) Prequelitis, Page 6
- Replies: 88
- Views: 40242
Re: Broken Dolls (Original Characters) Parts 4&5(pg1)
There are some fandoms that just seem tailor-made for OCs, and this is one of them. It's a big school, after all. So I say unto you: Bring it on.
Also: D'awwww. Cute chapter.
Also: D'awwww. Cute chapter.
- Tue Apr 20, 2010 9:49 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Broken Dolls (OCs) Prequelitis, Page 6
- Replies: 88
- Views: 40242
Re: Broken Dolls (Original Characters)
Hey, pretty nice stuff. Keep up the good work!
I liked the bit about the visual novel. Very meta.
I liked the bit about the visual novel. Very meta.
- Wed Apr 14, 2010 4:06 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A day in the life of ____________
- Replies: 65
- Views: 34620
Re: A day in the life of ____________
I have to agree in that the "script" format is a bit offputting, but, that aside, this is very well-written. Keep at it.
- Tue Apr 13, 2010 10:13 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: KosherBacon's writefaggotry: Lilly, Hisao, Page 18
- Replies: 282
- Views: 130893
Re: KosherBacon's writefaggotry: Rin & Hisao (Pg4)
I'm usually content to lurk, but I just had to comment here.
Good show! As you know, Rin is my favorite girl, and I can tell you had lots of fun writing her. This story is cute, sweet and funny. Nicely done.
Good show! As you know, Rin is my favorite girl, and I can tell you had lots of fun writing her. This story is cute, sweet and funny. Nicely done.
- Thu Apr 08, 2010 1:41 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Thank God for Hangovers
- Replies: 173
- Views: 56936
Re: Thank God for Hangovers
You'd be surprised. Fandom be's kwazy.Sgt_Frog wrote:Anyway, many characters at Yamaku have health problems or other various disabilities that make it almost impossible to have a Mary Sue or Gary Stu-like character.
- Sat Mar 27, 2010 6:32 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: It's Dangerous To Go Alone
- Replies: 15
- Views: 10411
Re: It's Dangerous To Go Alone
*puts on nitpicker hat*
It's "take this", not "have this".
*takes off nitpicker hat*
OMG SHOKYOOOOT!
It's "take this", not "have this".
*takes off nitpicker hat*
OMG SHOKYOOOOT!
- Tue Mar 23, 2010 8:24 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Madame Lillian's Specialty Service(END)Iwanako, Nakais, Trap
- Replies: 37
- Views: 25187
Re: Madame Lillian's Specialty Recreation and Delivery Service
What you did there. I see it.Amy Poplar
- Wed Sep 23, 2009 5:57 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: [Lilly, pr0n] Touch, Sound, Taste and Smell
- Replies: 7
- Views: 5325
Re: [Lilly, pr0n] Touch, Sound, Taste and Smell
I can't help but think that you could stand to insert more paragraphs. That said, good stuff. Very good. Definitely an interesting perspective for a sex scene. I like!