Yeah I did it for his story.Zerebos wrote:I think InSaiyan might be interested in your Natsume. If I recall correctly he recently started a pseudo-route for Natsume and is looking for Natsume art.
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Re: Emi's Art
- Sun Feb 12, 2017 11:53 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Recommend a VN
- Replies: 1746
- Views: 675149
Re: Recommend a VN
G-Senjou no Maou
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Maji de Watashi ni Koi Shinasai (has a sequel too)
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these are much longer to finish but still good.
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Maji de Watashi ni Koi Shinasai (has a sequel too)
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these are much longer to finish but still good.
Re: Emi's Art
Natsume Ooe
- Sun Feb 05, 2017 1:19 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
- Replies: 74
- Views: 53773
Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route
Alright I read what you've done so far, and it's good but I agree with mirage. I won't go into grammar since I'm sure he's already covered it. Keep it up
- Sun Feb 05, 2017 5:59 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
- Replies: 74
- Views: 53773
Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route
You misspelled your name lol.InSaiyan wrote:You can call me InSayain.
Also I'm too tired to read this now so I'll give my thoughts when I wake up.
- Thu Feb 02, 2017 2:21 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Cup and Saucer: A Rika Fan Route
- Replies: 35
- Views: 19570
Re: Cup and Saucer: A Rika Fan Route
British English, again. We spell words differently. put you on pack mule duty, Kapur is your problem These two are missing prepositions though. I did have other route writers look over things when I originally wrote them, it's just often that someone doesn't notice a preposition, or it could have b...
- Thu Feb 02, 2017 1:09 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
- Replies: 1198
- Views: 999745
Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 1/19)
I posted this in my art thread but felt like adding it here too, it's when saki goes swimming with hisao after getting out of her wheelchair.
- Wed Feb 01, 2017 6:42 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Cup and Saucer: A Rika Fan Route
- Replies: 35
- Views: 19570
Re: Cup and Saucer: A Rika Fan Route
1-09: Drift There's always this strange cosiness to being in the school building after class hours. 'treat her as you would your glorious club president. Or I'll put you pack mule duty.' 'Then Miss Kapur your problem. I mean partner,' 'I just realised why we're here,' So strange to think how so muc...
- Mon Jan 30, 2017 11:33 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: Blooper Reel
- Replies: 1333
- Views: 669543
Re: Blooper Reel
Nice. Almost everything in this thread is amazing.
- Mon Jan 30, 2017 4:37 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Cup and Saucer: A Rika Fan Route
- Replies: 35
- Views: 19570
Re: Cup and Saucer: A Rika Fan Route
Sorry for the absence there, I've had a terrible flu. Still do, just well enough to actually make it to my desk today. Hope you get better. Don't feel pressure to have to update every day, 5 days is hardly an absence. Some stories go weeks or longer without updates, it's okay if you take more time ...
- Sun Jan 29, 2017 3:21 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Letting go of the past - an Emi route.
- Replies: 8
- Views: 3948
Re: Letting go of the past - an Emi route.
OC is fine but if you're gonna make him a martial arts master you can't stick to the original story and you definitely can't have the same disability. if you rewrite it as some supernatural fic it's different but no one wants to read katawa shoujo with a professional ninja protagonist, it just doesn...
Re: Emi's Art
Saki learning to fly
Re: Emi's Art
meow
- Tue Jan 24, 2017 1:57 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
- Replies: 1198
- Views: 999745
Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 1/19)
Caught up to the story, finally. Good stuff so far, eager for the next part. It's a given that the nurse will end up giving Hisao condoms during the next appointment.
- Mon Jan 23, 2017 6:23 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Cup and Saucer: A Rika Fan Route
- Replies: 35
- Views: 19570
Re: Cup and Saucer: A Rika Fan Route
Your writing is good and I'm looking forward to reading more. 1-2: Control Sak 'Rika! You're up early!' Saki confirms my suspicions as she jogs up beside me outside the dorm. Rik 'I always try to be a diligent student, you know that.' Sak 'Uh-huh. You got ink on your cheek,' She comments as she lick...