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This was a good chapter. I feel like you went out of your way to get in some more development for some minor characters. It was good to see Kenji again, and I enjoyed seeing some character development for Armor, since she's pretty much the only character so far that I know nothing about. It's also a...

Silentcook wrote:"Challenging" people to write anything is a thinly-disguised request. Don't do that.

Sorry about that. I just thought I'd bring up a few characters who are even less significant than this one.

I'd say the first thing you need to work on is gravity. It just never feels right when a game has jumps that move up and suddenly switch down without any speed change the whole way through. Obviously, since it's a fighting game, it can't be all floaty like a platformer, but it still needs smoother j...

I challenge you to write a story about the Aura Mart greeter or Ice cream guy.
Or if it has to be someone from Yamaku, write about Shiraki or the guy from Lilly's stall who told her to take a break.

That's why Emi's so high. The 'training flag' as the flowchart calls it makes it hard to avoid Emi. I *went for* Shizune who I found most physically attractive (before I actually met her up close and personal) and found her also the most desirable match for my personality wise. Then I got the train...

Did you guys anticipate how positively people would react to certain parts of the game? (eg: lemons or "The problem must be in your pants")

I thought everything was crazy before. I come back after a couple weeks to see what I've missed.
What I've missed is the very embodiment of "dafuq"

A while ago I did some checks to see the likelihood of each ending if you make random choices, so I also figured out which paths are most likely taken. I thought that info might be relevant, so... Lilly: 1.7% Hanako: 1.7% Shizune: 4.0% Rin: 15.3% Emi: 23.3% Manly Picnic: 53.9% That's why Emi's so hi...

Hisao stood firm. “When I looked into that Godstone a few months back, I saw several major paths diverging from when I entered Yamaku. There are ones where I end up with almost any of the girls I now consider friends. But there also were a significant number of realities where that doesn't happen. ...

Mirage_GSM wrote:So now they've saved Hanako they won't even try to find a cure for that other guy?

After all they went through to save Hanako, barely making it in time, I doubt it'd even be possible to save Angel at this point. Plus, if nobody important died, what good would Emi be? That's my prediction anyway.

Question for the writers: I was wondering, did you write an entire branch from beginning to end (a main branch) and subsequently wrote the other branches based on that first branch? Or did you write all branches simultaneously? All the paths were written seperately, although they did know approxima...

I got Lilly's good end on my first try, too. I'd say it's quite an accomplishment, since it's the least likely ending in the whole game if you make random choices the whole way through. Also, Emi is such a common first path because it's the most likely path to end up on with random choices, other th...

Sovereign seems a bit too forceful for Lilly. Majesty seems a bit less imposing and still get the point across. True, but I think Sovereign sounds a little bit more like something she's be willing to call herself. Also, if she's gonna be insanely powerful, I think the forcefulness needs to be there...

I know very little about DnD, but I still managed to find this hilarious. It captured Kenji's character surprisingly well. Although, I doubt he would be so fond of groin kicks, as they would be completely ineffective against feminists. Dragon rape, though? Yeah, I could see that. Keep up the good wo...

Sovereign, maybe? It's an adjective to describe something of royalty or having total control. The royalty thing fits with how important she could be if she's got cosmic-level power, while the control thing reflects her personality and her power. I also checked to make sure that this one isn't used.