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I am enjoying the series looking forward to what comes next...also I saw a few small problems in it, like using the wrong word for a certain thing in a sentence, but nothing to get really worried about. I am still looking forward to seeing what happened to Scout many things are racing through my min...

Hisao touches his other TIME PARADOX

Don't worry...I'm a lazy bum

very interesting...good...no great...no me gusta "Claps"

ehemm...Bobberson you said that this chapter is crap.......YOU ARE NOT A BAD AUTHOR YOUR A DAMN GOOD ONE...I went to a TF2 fanfiction page to find more TF2 stuff only one was just as interesting as this although they didn't ever finish it and they ended writing it two years ago...Oh well looking for...

Positively terrific I like your writing I'll be waiting for your next ones...and even though it may be too late good luck on exams...I still have two months till mine.
looking forward to more

I would like to see scout join the track team XD and beat Emi XD
Yeah and also see the other TF2 characters come along as well.
This story deserves a...Victory...

I found this amusing I would actually like to see more...continue please.

Hope chapter 2 was as good as the first you are an extraordinary writer continue on with your career.

Very good...I wish I was a good author :/

Honestly one of the best writings I've seen about KS keep it up...you are a great author.

A lovely story continue.

Really enjoyed this and noticed you posted it on your website recently =D.

wow, what incredible writing continue on.

I don't know why but the horror movie Haloween theme reminds me of it, I have no idea why.