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Hehehe dont act so preachy now Sensei for you are also suffering from Purple Prose . Heck, you even tried to improve my disorder by making the foreplay more elegant. But at least you know how to control it in your stories unlike mine which I just realized today
You made me hungry too

Actually, I am currently researching on this "Purple Prose" thingy. And goddamn it, he was right! PAINFULLY RIGHT :cry: EDIT: WOOOHOOOO THANKYOU THANKYOU THANKYOU griffon08! I finished my research and now I know how to solve my problem . Your criticism was the most useful! Now, time for bed

Here are things you should never use in a story where you are trying to convey romance and sex: 'grit', 'crotch', 'violent', 'parchment', 'slug', 'malevolent', and the phrase 'kneading a[sic] dough' when referring to breasts -Funny, cause it seems like we have a different definition for erotica huh...

How about another inspirational video?:

WITNESS THE GIRL WHO SAW THE WORLD FOR THE FIRST TIME!

Oh about the guy I posted earlier? I just saw his main page. A true tear jecker.

Damn, I was hoping to see more of you guys in FF

Actually, it was a friendly gesture. I saw TehLandShark on FF and I felt glad not to be alone. I was just hoping to see you as well
So, wheres your account?

The community there can be very amateur, from my experience. Furthermore, requests for more do not necessarily indicate that the product is good in any way. Again, this is exacerbated by the amateurish community of FFnet. -No argue in that, but then, do you have an FF account? We may be amatuers bu...

Just what kind of sane person will actually drag a worn out religious argument in a Katawa Forum?
For someone with 4000 posts, you act so immature

In my country, improvement is success. We care none about competition for your worst enemy is yourself :D Also, I have read once that money makes an artist worst. Which leads to self denial. Ill try to find the link if you will ask for it (You really should get a grip of your tenses and the other gr...

Anyone for the THE MOST POWERFUL MAN ON EARTH? http://www.mentalbreeze.com/humor/wp-content/uploads/2013/03/awesome-nick-vujicic-e2-80-a6.jpg Click the link below http://tammykling.com/the-most-powerful-man-in-the-world/ And his Wiki page: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nick_Vujicic His Video: http:/...

Shizune will be a tiger mom, nuff said! Misha's broken heart will corrupt her. And her once overly cheerful self will be a tale of the past. Oh wait, Lily will be an english teacher who will be played pranks on (i hope not) Rin will be an artist genuis, but she will be misunderstood. However, she wi...

Creativity, you'll find, comes in bursts. It isn't something you turn on and off like a light switch; it just doesn't work that way. Look at the post dates for the first 13 chapters of my Tomorrow's Doom story. The entire first two acts total over 90,000 words (which is a low estimate), and they we...

Well, most things have already been mentioned by Helbereth and Blackwaltz. I have to admit that I didn't even get to the Yuri part before I skipped down to the comments. - Hey you know what, I re-read and re-read my story. And the only thing I can see that I am guilty of is the grammar and spelling...

Stepping only on the dark tiles?
Arent that an improvised version of "Dont step on the Crack" which is played mostly on Friday the 13th events?

Doomish. Oh shit, son. Maybe that's not the best suggestion for a beginning reader. Heck, it wasn't the best suggestion to someone hardened to that sorta thing. I mean, it's great and all, but... dangerous. Due to your warning, I just tried Chap 1. It started great and all,but it soon grew weary an...