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by Gajzla
Wed Apr 29, 2015 7:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Blank Slate - (Updated 12-16) Class Reunion
Replies: 135
Views: 80784

Re: Firing Blanks - One Shots

I’m not sure how you do it, but you always seem to make me like Shizune*, even in this older regretful form. I guess on the face of it this is quite a sad story, but the brief glimpse we’re given actually turns out being, or at least feeling, positive. Your use of easy flowing prose is something I a...
by Gajzla
Wed Apr 29, 2015 12:39 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: You have been playing too much KS when...
Replies: 2412
Views: 806562

Re: You have been playing too much KS when...

...your better half notes that you're wearing socks in bed, and you have to avoid calling her Emi for the rest of the evening. I threw half a lemon at my gf last time I saw her and started laughing because I immediately thought the word 'anal'. It was bad because I laughed at that, but then I was s...
by Gajzla
Wed Apr 29, 2015 12:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
Replies: 205
Views: 140770

Re: Miki: Fragments (Ch.13 Posted 28th April 2015)

Well plenty of countries don't have life-sentences anymore. Germany still has it technically but in practice "custody until death" has been ruled to be against our constitution. So usually a life sentence will mean that the sentence will be turned into a parole after 15 years - unless the...
by Gajzla
Tue Apr 28, 2015 1:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
Replies: 205
Views: 140770

Re: Miki: Fragments (Ch.13 Posted 28th April 2015)

In such cases, the prosecution can seek a minimum term of not less than 3 years, true. However, all 'definite term' sentences of this kind can be halved at the discretion of the judge, and IIRC, the average length of such sentences is 4.5 years. Ten is indeed a -bit- high. The defence lawyer's name...
by Gajzla
Tue Apr 28, 2015 12:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
Replies: 205
Views: 140770

Re: Miki: Fragments (Ch.13 Posted 28th April 2015)

One thing I forgot to mention earlier: Ten years in jail seems a bit much for what was basically an accident. That's what the Japanese usually give to murderers. My sorce is: Here Article 205. (Injury Causing Death) A person who causes another to suffer injury resulting in death shall be punished b...
by Gajzla
Tue Apr 28, 2015 12:38 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The Official KS Headcanon Thread
Replies: 2008
Views: 697596

Re: The Official KS Headcanon Thread

brythain wrote: Exactly. You either have to be a family member or have a strong family connection. [HERE] is a useful primer.
Well I didn't know that...

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by Gajzla
Tue Apr 28, 2015 12:00 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The Official KS Headcanon Thread
Replies: 2008
Views: 697596

Re: The Official KS Headcanon Thread

Eurobeatjester wrote:SCA can be hereditary. I don't imagine Saki willingly choosing to have kids. :(
She could always foster or adopt a child, It really depends if she herself has seen love one die to the illness. She wouldn’t want to put that unhappiness of a child I don’t think.
by Gajzla
Tue Apr 28, 2015 11:47 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
Replies: 205
Views: 140770

Re: Miki: Fragments (Ch.13 Posted 28th April 2015)

Hehe, you beat Mirage_GSM to the corrections this time ;) Glad you're enjoying the story so far, now to a few of your points. perhaps learn to use semi-colons or commas or something to break up some of the longer multi-clause bits. I understand what you mean, this is something i've been working on l...
by Gajzla
Mon Apr 27, 2015 6:29 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The Official KS Headcanon Thread
Replies: 2008
Views: 697596

Re: The Official KS Headcanon Thread

If that's the case, then who would Saki lose her virginity to, exactly? :o Unless the school’s in the middle of nowhere I’m sure she could find a boy to do the horizontal monster mash with, I do think she regrets acting so rashly though, in hindsight she would have lost it to someone she loves. Lik...
by Gajzla
Mon Apr 27, 2015 6:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
Replies: 205
Views: 140770

Re: Miki: Fragments (Updated 21st April 2015)

Hello all, not much to say about this chapter, other than I really like it. Hope you do too, as always feedback and comments are appreciated. Laces, Trains and Rain. “I'm so sorry,” Ayumu says softly from his perch on my bed. “It’s fine, don’t worry about it,” I try not to let my displeasure show i...
by Gajzla
Mon Apr 27, 2015 4:02 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The Official KS Headcanon Thread
Replies: 2008
Views: 697596

Re: The Official KS Headcanon Thread

If that's the case, then who would Saki lose her virginity to, exactly? :o Unless the school’s in the middle of nowhere I’m sure she could find a boy to do the horizontal monster mash with, I do think she regrets acting so rashly though, in hindsight she would have lost it to someone she loves. Lik...
by Gajzla
Sat Apr 25, 2015 2:54 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The Official KS Headcanon Thread
Replies: 2008
Views: 697596

Re: The Official KS Headcanon Thread

Rhodri wrote:Am I missing something with that?
Big spoilers for the Bucket list.
by Gajzla
Sat Apr 25, 2015 10:31 am
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: The Inane Doodlings of an Attention Deficit
Replies: 171
Views: 229056

Re: The Inane Doodlings of an Attention Deficit

That's epic, well played sir, well played.
by Gajzla
Sat Apr 25, 2015 9:13 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The Official KS Headcanon Thread
Replies: 2008
Views: 697596

Re: The Official KS Headcanon Thread

Katawa Shoujo: Where waking up to find your girlfriend dead is the good ending.
by Gajzla
Wed Apr 22, 2015 10:15 am
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Reqreation: First steps (Updated: 21-11-2016)
Replies: 172
Views: 107549

Re: Reqreation: First steps (Updated: 22-4)

This is really good. I kinda imagine this being an epilogue scene. Miki wants some, and hisao like "shoo, game of thrones is on." =p