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by Thanatos02
Sat May 18, 2013 3:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 716980

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 5/3]

4-9 might take until Sunday. Proofreading is taking a bit longer than I'd hoped.
Also, imagine my surprise when I look through new comments and Suriko posted in the thread. I doubt he cares about the story here, but still.
by Thanatos02
Thu May 16, 2013 1:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 716980

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 5/3]

God dammit Thanatos! When this is over I hope you continue to write more routes/fics. I think I speak for alot of us when I say your akira route is one we must check for updates as soon as we log in. Maybe you can break the curse of the miki route. I don't know if I plan to keep on writing after th...
by Thanatos02
Sun May 05, 2013 4:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 716980

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 5/3]

Good chapter. Good read. Back to the adventures of Lara Croft and her longbow. This was a very exciting chapter. Everything Sabin said above me mirrors my own thoughts. This story gets better with every chapter I read, it's now at the point where I'm yelling at the characters out loud. My god, my h...
by Thanatos02
Fri May 03, 2013 11:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 716980

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 4/23]

Been editing non-stop since Tuesday, so hopefully this time I can put something out that isn't riddled with tiny errors and contradictions, especially since this is one of the most important points in the story thus far. Anyway, we've still got one more chapter to go before the end of act 4. I hope...
by Thanatos02
Wed May 01, 2013 11:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 716980

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 4/23]

I, uh.
I fixed that one mistake about a week ago.

Changed it to
Despite it being fairly early in the evening, she’s already changed into a pair of royal-blue pajamas
4-8 is almost ready. I'm hoping to release it this Friday.
by Thanatos02
Wed Apr 24, 2013 2:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 716980

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 4/23]

I believe it's in Act 1 in the scene where Hisao first makes Akira's acquaintance. Lilly's concerned Akira isn't eating well and Akira gets annoyed and tells her something like "I can cook without blowing myself up...most of the time." She also mentions there that Lilly usually cooked for...
by Thanatos02
Wed Apr 24, 2013 1:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 716980

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 4/23]

I swear you always update when i'm just about to start doing some assignment work for uni :P Not that i'm complaining though, I always enjoy reading your latest chapter. As per usual keep up the amazing work and I look forward to the next chapter! Glad you're still keeping up and thanks for the com...
by Thanatos02
Tue Apr 23, 2013 9:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 716980

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 4/23]

Wasn't it established in the game, btw, that Akira was such a lousy cook that Lilly always made the meals for them when they still lived together? Really? I don't remember any reference to such a thing, but I could be wrong because I've missed a couple of other things in the past. If you find that ...
by Thanatos02
Tue Apr 23, 2013 6:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 716980

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 4/23]

That, my friend, is author's frustration embodied in its purest form. Indeed. That's exactly what I was thinking. Or some form of transcendent writing popping in. Might be beyond our understanding. If mashing your fingers against the keyboard in frustration is transcending the boundaries of convent...
by Thanatos02
Tue Apr 23, 2013 3:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 716980

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 4/1]

Alright, finally finished. Sorry about the incredibly long update times lately. It's been a bit of a bad month for me so I apologize if it feels like I've dropped off the face of the earth. I know no one cares about that though so here's 4-7. We're only one chapter away from the climax of act 4, so...
by Thanatos02
Fri Apr 19, 2013 2:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 716980

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 4/1]

I would just like to say that I am not dead. There's been a lot going on school-wise for me this month, so Akira hasn't gotten as much attention as she deserves. 4-7 is about 3/4 of the way there, and I've been squeezing in time whenever I can. Sorry for the constant delays, you guys.
by Thanatos02
Thu Apr 04, 2013 3:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 716980

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 4/1]

Well, I'm honestly happy that there is SOME drama. Oh and the correct english is a blessing as well. I've been reading a lot of badly translated VN's. Correct english is a given, I think. It's kinda hard to take things seriously or enjoy the story when everything is typed lyk dis. I do screw up fro...
by Thanatos02
Mon Apr 01, 2013 5:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 716980

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 4/1]

It's very thought-provoking to think where you would've taken the story had the earlier (and rather sudden) "break-up" actually gone through. Original plan was to have Akira and Tetsuo in a constantly fluctuating state of broken up/attempting to get back together with each fluctuation occ...
by Thanatos02
Mon Apr 01, 2013 4:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 716980

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 3/11]

Hey y'all, sorry this update came so late. I took a small detour to work on some other things I've been sitting on. We're also going through a rather critical point in the story, so the burden to not fuck everything up is weighing pretty heavily on everything I do and I'm starting to feel a bit of ...
by Thanatos02
Sun Mar 17, 2013 10:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 716980

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 3/11]

I'm holding off on replying to all the comments that have accumulated because I feel like there's nothing I can say that won't spoil the next few chapters.
I don't dislike speculation, though.

I'm not actually going to kill any of the characters, I just felt like sticking that in there.