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Nicely written, really. I was kind of afraid to read this as I am a huge Lilly-worshipper, but everything is done is a way that does not clash with my thinking of the story. Except since this is a Lilly-arc I do not think that Hanako really has the hots for Hisao, because this a different Hanako (t...

Can't wait for the rest of it!! An awesome fanfic, I think you should continue. :D If Hanako doesn't know he's asleep then Hisao hasn't opened his eyes. This is the only typo I found. :) Thanks guys. I'll be finding some time to write more when I can. And thanks for catching that :p just changed it

I have decided to write portions of the Lilly route through her eyes. See below I have made a couple of decisions regarding this. 1. Writing in the story dialogue is cumbersome and affecting my ability as a writer (it's fatiguing so my work depreciates). So I will only write the scene from when Lill...

I really like this fan fic. It captures Misha's upbeat demeanor with self loathing on the inside well. Misha's one of my favorite girls, if she actually had a route she would probably be my absolute favorite, she's just so damn sweet. Can't wait to see more!!! If you haven't figured it out by yours...

I really like this fan fic. It captures Misha's upbeat demeanor with self loathing on the inside well.

Misha's one of my favorite girls, if she actually had a route she would probably be my absolute favorite, she's just so damn sweet. Can't wait to see more!!!

My god, what she did to Misha physically hurt me. You're a damn good writer, and you've got me hooked into this story pretty deep.

I think casting Saki as a cruel bitch really made her confession to Hisao hurt that much more.

I'll definitely be keeping a close eye on this

I'm very interested in this. Keep it up!!!

I don't know why, but the scene where Hisao walks in on Rin taking a nap and she starts crying in her sleep really got me.

I do that

This story is now canon in my mind, and is the true ending of Hanako's line.

Almost lost it in the last chapter where Lilly thinks (I've always wanted to know)