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by Thanatos02
Mon Mar 11, 2013 11:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 720283

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 3/11]

Thantos. Why you do dis. I loved this chapter and patiently stalk this forum everyday for an update. :3 I love you for making this and hope for your best along your path of writing!! Ahhhhhh, Tetsuo makes more sense to me now. I think you do a pretty good job with dialogue Thanatos. I enjoyed this ...
by Thanatos02
Mon Mar 11, 2013 5:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 720283

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 3/2]

Oh noes, PLOT. Act 4 - Part 5: Imbalance I pace up each step, examining the clipboard in my hands as groups of men pass me, some still wearing white lab coats while others have theirs folded over one arm. I’ve come to filter out their speech as their discussions always soar over my head in terms of...
by Thanatos02
Mon Mar 11, 2013 5:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 720283

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 3/2]

I'm really digging this story. Whelp, just caught up to this, and now I have to wait. I'll be eagerly looking forward to the next installment. Thanatos. Simcity keeps giving out on me, and I'm yearning for some Akira action. But seriously, great job. It's getting better and better; looking forward ...
by Thanatos02
Mon Mar 04, 2013 6:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 720283

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 3/2]

I do like the idea of extra content, though. Something like a prologue through Akira's eyes that doesn't have huge impact on the story, just for fun. I support this decision. When a writer has built a world -which you have done- it's always nice to see them use it more than once, to get the most ba...
by Thanatos02
Mon Mar 04, 2013 2:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 720283

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 3/2]

Wow, is it just me or this fanfic is better than the actual game? Even J.K.Rowlings would roll her eyes with so many coincidences, but this is one hell of a story. Very detailed, an incredibly deep Akira character, and even has interactions with the other characters in such a way that it looks like...
by Thanatos02
Sun Mar 03, 2013 7:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 720283

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 3/2]

Wheee! I'm tired. I like how you got Hisao onto the roof for that conversation. Although I think it happened after the exams though. But you talked about Lilly and the mafia. So all is forgiven. In the VN it happens in Lilly's route, and it happens before Lilly leaves for Scotland. I figured workin...
by Thanatos02
Sat Mar 02, 2013 11:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 720283

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 2/18]

Went back and fixed all those typos Neio pointed out, so hopefully everything is in order again. I've been playing a lot of Path of Radiance as of late since I finally managed to find a copy for less than $80 used/$200 new. 3D Fire Emblem is delicious. Now onto 4-4. I regret that I didn't just add ...
by Thanatos02
Wed Feb 27, 2013 1:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 916
Views: 726893

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)

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Congrats on making it to the end, man.
by Thanatos02
Tue Feb 26, 2013 12:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 720283

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 2/18]

Too many things to reply to! Really thankful for all the compliments I've been getting, and all the typos that have been pointed out have been taken to mind, although I've been incredibly lazy as of late so I apologize if you checked for the correction and it wasn't made. 4-4 is coming along, althou...
by Thanatos02
Wed Feb 20, 2013 1:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 720283

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 2/18]

Train of thought: :D :) :( :) :D :o :( :? 8) :o :( :cry: :| More. I need more. IT FEEDS ME. You must be starving between all these weeklong delays. Really? So he had to work on a sunday? Uh, yeah? Is it weird to work on a Sunday in the 21st century? You have a very good lighthearted way of writing....
by Thanatos02
Tue Feb 19, 2013 1:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 720283

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 2/2]

Not a lot to say about this one, y'all. Short and sweet. Would have been able to fit the next chapter in here if I wasn't so behind on updates. Is "behind on updates" even valid when I'm taking 2 weeks to write something on a supposed 3-5 day release schedule? Act 4 - Part 3: Retrospectiv...
by Thanatos02
Wed Feb 13, 2013 1:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 720283

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 2/2]

You owe us nothing. It's a pleasure to be able to read it each time you update. Besides, unlike LittleKuriboh and Scott Ramsoomair (VG Cats), you update frequently. You owe us nothing. Yeah, nothing more annoying than irregular updates. coughvalvecough. Take your time, though; we are patient with o...
by Thanatos02
Sun Feb 10, 2013 12:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 720283

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 2/2]

So considering it's the weekend and all, are we going to be able to see more of Akira possibly? :3 4-3 might actually be a little delayed, since I'm writing up a few Valentine's Day pieces for the folks back home. If anything, I'll try to get it out by Valentine's Day. It won't be a 2 week delay li...
by Thanatos02
Sun Feb 03, 2013 8:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 720283

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 2/2]

Great chapter, the backstory was good to read and didn't detract from it at all. My only quibble is... moonlight in the middle of a thunderstorm? I, uh... I had the image in my mind of a city during a thunderstorm, and I knew that there would still be light but I was having trouble drawing all the ...
by Thanatos02
Sun Feb 03, 2013 7:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 720283

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 2/2]

Brilliant chapter. Totally was not expecting that to come out of Hisao's mouth but hey booze does what it wants :lol: But seriously, you left me hanging at the end :( It's moments like this when I wish I had a time machine. I just wanna read through all of Act 4 at once :O Thanks for another wonder...