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I never said I didn't like it, I just said that I would have been much better if I had seen it before I 100% the game

I think this would work a lot better for people who haven't played before. Most of us here know all about the routes and what happens in them so we all know what the big reveal is before we even start reading. However I feel if back a year ago when I first played it it would have had a greater effec...

I never understand why that's such a beating topic. I mean I can kinda see why but it doesn't bother me that much

great chapter! Things are starting to unravel now

Hm this is very interesting concept. I can think of many possibilities of ways this could go. Welcome to the forum!

My advise is to get a editor. Even if you have decent grammer both you and spell check will miss things. For example English is one of my best subjects and I still make silly mistakes that I miss

After getting around to reading this I think it has great potential. It's to early to tell the characters full personalities but I like them so far. And that you plan on writing it like a vn in the way you say your going to go back to a point and have him end up a different way. Deffinetly keeping a...

Yes he made atleast one, it's in the download file, I thinks it's called suzus long night or so thing like that

Pro tip. Instead of making a new thread every part reply to the other one with the new part

Personally I prefer a mix of them both. Finishing writing the whole thing, then releasing it episodically. It makes it so you are gurentied a chapter to post on any givin day and you receive critisim so you can edit parts to fit more with what people point out so you don't write yourself into a hole...

It was a pleasant surprise to see an update to this, in fact I thought it had ended last chapter. Glad I checked the fan fiction section today

Some interesting "developments" in this chapter, I can't help but feel that Rin might have some feelings for Hisao after this chapter. Just a gut feeling

Little things can spiral into large conversations and discussions, heck this thread was started because of one chapter of a story, it's human nature

Good work! Nice to see some of saki, she rarely pops up in fan art nowadays

I love the joke updates like is one and the sex scene skip a little back, it's a good hokd over till the next chapter and it's entertaining