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by Dr.Worm
Wed May 01, 2013 2:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once More [Update: 9/26]
Replies: 86
Views: 32598

Re: Once More [Hisao x OC] [Update: 4/25]

--- Chapter 5, Part 1: Dinner and a Movie I grab Hisao by his stupid sweater-vest as soon as the door shuts behind us. There is no word to describe just how furious I am. Oh wait. There totally is. Incredi-fucking-bly. Yeah. That'll work. I'm incredi-fucking-bly furious right now. I'd slam him up a...
by Dr.Worm
Fri Apr 26, 2013 6:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once More [Update: 9/26]
Replies: 86
Views: 32598

Re: Once More [Hisao x OC] [Update: 4/25]

Everything you wrote. Thank you as always for the feedback! It's greatly appreciated. I went ahead and cut the 4th wall bit. After reading through it all again, it's very jarring for the sake of a joke. I'll read through the piece again and look for the missing words. And everything you wrote. What...
by Dr.Worm
Thu Apr 25, 2013 6:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once More [Update: 9/26]
Replies: 86
Views: 32598

Re: Once More [Hisao x OC] [Update: 4/25]

Everything you said. Thank you! I was anxious about breaking the 4th wall, but as you said, I thought Katsuo would be the type to do it. And also, I'm pretty sure he's just arguing with himself in his head. "Isn't that right Katsuo? Right you are, Other-Katsuo." Now, I have to go back to ...
by Dr.Worm
Thu Apr 25, 2013 6:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once More [Update: 9/26]
Replies: 86
Views: 32598

Re: Once More [Hisao x OC] [Update: 4/12]

---Chapter 4, Part 2: Reunion With the aid of a cab, Hisao left to pick up his ladyfriend, Rin, from the train-station. Hisao said that it was a short trip and it seemed silly for both of us to leave the house to go get just one girl. Besides, I was already set on making stir-fry for dinner and it'...
by Dr.Worm
Thu Apr 25, 2013 6:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once More [Update: 9/26]
Replies: 86
Views: 32598

Re: Once More [Hisao x OC] [Update: 4/12]

---Chapter 4, Part 1: Reunion I don't know Hisao's girlfriend's name. Is that rude? I mean, he hasn't exactly told me it. I haven't asked. I guess that would save me from being a rude jerk, right? After all, I'm about to meet her in a few hours and I haven't the foggiest idea of who she is or what ...
by Dr.Worm
Thu Apr 25, 2013 5:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once More [Update: 9/26]
Replies: 86
Views: 32598

Re: Once More [Hisao x OC] [Update: 4/12]

griffon8 wrote:I'm enjoying this quite a bit.

But once again I must point out that there is no culture of tipping in Japan.
Fix'd.

Thank you!
by Dr.Worm
Fri Apr 12, 2013 5:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once More [Update: 9/26]
Replies: 86
Views: 32598

Re: Once More [Hisao x OC] [Update: 4/12]

Interesting coincidence. I'm also watching Giant Robo at the moment. Can't remember any giant lizards though, and I don't think it's older than his dad, so there is probably an earlier season of that franchise.. Anyway you posted part 1 twice. Happens to the best of us. And I really like the scene ...
by Dr.Worm
Fri Apr 12, 2013 3:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once More [Update: 9/26]
Replies: 86
Views: 32598

Re: Once More [Hisao x OC] [Update: 4/5]

---Chapter 3, Part 2: Planning a Weekend “So you’re serious about this weekend?” I look up from my slice of cake and give Hisao a short nod. I’m sure that he knows that this look I’m giving him is bewilderment. Did someone lie to him about a sleepover or something when he was a kid? We’ve been comi...
by Dr.Worm
Fri Apr 12, 2013 3:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once More [Update: 9/26]
Replies: 86
Views: 32598

Re: Once More [Hisao x OC] [Update: 4/5]

---Chapter 3, Part 1: Planning a Weekend Click. Click. Click click cliiiiick. After about three days of exams, there’s nothing like some good old-fashioned bad television programming to take your mind off the stress. I should probably study for the next two days, but I really need to take a break. ...
by Dr.Worm
Fri Apr 05, 2013 7:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once More [Update: 9/26]
Replies: 86
Views: 32598

Re: Once More [Hisao x OC]

---Chapter 2, Part 2: The Expedition Hisao holds open the door for me to walk into the Apollica. The heavy scent of roasted coffee beans smacks me in the face as I stride in. There are a few other smells lingering there too, possibly drifting in from the kitchen. Is that cinnamon? I hope it is. A g...
by Dr.Worm
Fri Apr 05, 2013 7:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once More [Update: 9/26]
Replies: 86
Views: 32598

Re: Once More [Hisao x OC]

---Chapter 2, Part 1 : The Expedition I emerge out of the lab with my fist held high in the air, a thick wad of papers crumpled between them. Hisao is sitting on a table waiting for me outside of the building. We decided to pick up our practical results separately, since we made a bet just before t...
by Dr.Worm
Wed Apr 03, 2013 5:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once More [Update: 9/26]
Replies: 86
Views: 32598

Re: Once More [Hisao x OC]

--- Chapter 1, Part 2 : A Favor and a Friend The dormitory hallways are already packed with frantic, scrambling students. I collide into a few and collect a few stares. I got used to that pretty quickly last year. This is a normal college, not a school out in the country-side hand tailored to helpi...
by Dr.Worm
Tue Apr 02, 2013 9:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once More [Update: 9/26]
Replies: 86
Views: 32598

Re: Once More [Hisao x OC]

--- Chapter 1, Part 1: A Favor and A Friend The phone on my nightstand goes off. Ughhhh. No. It can’t be time to get up yet. I had a two hour staring contest with the ceiling again last night. He won. I just want to sleep more. Pleeeeeeeaaaaase? I manage to slide my hand out from the covers and gro...
by Dr.Worm
Tue Apr 02, 2013 9:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once More [Update: 9/26]
Replies: 86
Views: 32598

Once More [Update: 9/26]

Hi. I'm new. I started writing this a while ago. I decided to post it... It's post Yamaku Graduation and focuses on Hisao and an OC, named Katsuo Yoshida. [Pictured here.] And then eventually two of the girls from the main cast. I do the occasional quick sketch for my stories. I'm not super great. B...