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by Rikabro
Thu Oct 11, 2012 8:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 56
Views: 29212

Re: Doomish's Misha Route: The Rewrite! [Updated 10/08]

Not gonna lie, the bit with Rin left a bad taste in my mouth. Maybe because it brought to mind that terrible episode from Act One where Lilly and Hisao bump into Rin, and Lilly proceeds to treat her like a leper. I also cringed a little when the subject of problems within pants came up. Almost felt ...
by Rikabro
Thu Oct 11, 2012 4:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 449
Views: 336517

Re: Rika Story - updated 5/15/2012 (mature content)

I'm just surprised to find this still getting views. Here is the conclusion. There may be some editorial flaws that I'll tidy up later, but it's late by my standard and I have class in, oh, five hours? So I should post it now and worry about those later. I want to thank you guys again for taking the...
by Rikabro
Mon Jun 18, 2012 11:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 449
Views: 336517

Re: Rika Story - updated 5/15/2012 (mature content)

I'm really sorry. I have been working on it (a LOT lately) and I plan on posting it within the next couple of days. I would have said something earlier but I've been avoiding this place like a guy who owes money to the mafia. It's rude of me to leave this without an update for so long and I honestly...
by Rikabro
Tue Jun 12, 2012 9:59 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4987
Views: 4318381

Re: Ask!

Suriko wrote:The "as a unified entity" is a big qualifier. Some stuff is happening behind the scenes from KS devs.
Oh boy, here we go...
by Rikabro
Wed May 16, 2012 12:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 449
Views: 336517

Re: Rika Story - updated 5/8/2012 (mature content)

Note: This is NOT the final installment. There are still a few scenes yet to go after this. Picking up from "Defend Rika..." *** Scene 12: Polarity I close my eyes, trying to gather my thoughts. Emi truly has been my best friend since coming to Yamaku. She’s always been there for me, helpi...
by Rikabro
Tue May 15, 2012 11:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 449
Views: 336517

Re: Rika Story - updated 5/8/2012 (mature content)

A week with no updates is very un-bro of me. I'm posting something new tonight, though. It's written and I just have to iron it out a touch. It won't be the conclusion, but it's leading up to it. In the meantime, I wanted to thank you guys for all the very nice replies, and even the not-so-nice ones...
by Rikabro
Wed May 09, 2012 12:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko, erotic content) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 63
Views: 25748

Re: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko WIP) [UPDATED 5/8]

I love your Yuuko. She's adorable. I told you Yuuko was my first love, right? You seem to be totally inside her head. Love the paranoia, the self-deprecation, augh... I love it but I just want to hug her so bad. Your Kenji is pretty hilarious too, and their chemistry (which I didn't think would be p...
by Rikabro
Tue May 08, 2012 11:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 449
Views: 336517

Re: Rika Story - updated 5/7/2012 (mature content)

Well, I’m not made of stone. How can I argue with this kind of feedback? So here. I wrote an additional scene to supplement the last one. Consider this a mini-update. Scene 11.5: A Fresh Start I awake in a daze as a familiar noise stirs me to consciousness. An old sound that I used to love hearing. ...
by Rikabro
Mon May 07, 2012 10:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 449
Views: 336517

Re: Rika Story - updated 5/4/2012 (mature content)

I wish you changed either of these to "Magnum Opus" instead. I'm glad that had such an impact on you. Yeah, I wanted to show Hisao getting a little crazy and weird with some of the philosophical mumbo-jumbo because that's what Rika has been filling his head with, after all. I'm glad it pu...
by Rikabro
Mon May 07, 2012 9:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 449
Views: 336517

Re: Rika Story - updated 5/4/2012 (mature content)

Ha, ha, time for comfort. *** Scene 10: Promise The sight of Emi on the side of my bed, weeping for my sake, scared, not knowing what to do or what it is that she’s done to deserve all of this pain and misery I’ve left at her feet. I can't stand to see it any more. I never want to see it again. I ta...
by Rikabro
Fri May 04, 2012 2:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 449
Views: 336517

Re: Rika Story - updated 5/1/2012 (mature content)

People ITT arguing about Rika... It's like she's really a real character. ;_; Here's the new update, ending in a story branch. I'm writing both outcomes in an order of my choosing, so again, not a CYOA. Note also the use of tasteful phrases such as "reproductive organs" and "Rika swal...
by Rikabro
Thu May 03, 2012 1:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 449
Views: 336517

Re: Rika Story - updated 5/1/2012 (mature content)

I don't know anymore, Hisao. I'm actually glad this aspect of Hisao is coming across. I was kind of shooting for that here. Heading out there, he's a naive city slicker. By day 2 of the trip he's distracted, homesick, terrified of what might happen to him, terrified of what happened the night prior...
by Rikabro
Wed May 02, 2012 5:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 67
Views: 23187

Re: Shiina Mikado's Finest Hour and other Misha one-shots! [

Ahh, nice. The second story gave me the smiles. Shizune notices Misha is going up-top commando. Chooses "Log flume." [You're thinking dirty thoughts, aren't you Shiichan?] First story, the raw realism of "eating disorder Misha" is very you. Silly Misha going on /adv/. I'll be che...
by Rikabro
Wed May 02, 2012 1:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route
Replies: 153
Views: 109041

Re: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route

What I'm really liking about this story is that it's so hard to stay mad at Saki because of how tragic she is. I can imagine dating her is like being in a very abusive relationship that you just can't leave.

Also, your Kenji ranks with the best I've read. KS routes included. Props.
by Rikabro
Wed May 02, 2012 1:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: What Lies Beneath: Updated 5/15/12 Chapter 5 now up
Replies: 49
Views: 19338

Re: What Lies Beneath: Updated 4/30/12 Chapter 4 now up

Well, that certainly wasn't what I was expecting. Harem end achieved in a most unexpected fashion? I lol'd Actually, I'm laughing reading this whole thing. It's really good. The plot concept is awesome and the delivery is top-notch. You're revealing just the right amount of everything at each step ...